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chapter one

*Hi guyz..well its my first story so i dont know how it will go on..i just need your support and encouragement..and if you see any mistakes then please feel free to help me correct them cause i know..Nobody is born perfect..right??
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Mr and Mrs.Peterson were sitting on the porch enjoying their evening with a hot cup of tea and honey cakes coated with chocolate.Mr.peterson in his fifty still looked thirty years before just a little wrinkles near the eyes and a few grey hairs which just matched his creamish complexion,while Mrs Nancy peterson just looked like the heroine of hollywood with black charcoal like hair of silk texture..her face perfect with almond shaped eyes and rosy lips plus those wrinkles were like cherry on the cupcake.Mr and Mrs.Peterson were a pair made in heaven..perfect for each other.

It seemed to be a perfect evening for a chit-chat with your loved ones but someone was not happy with it.

Natalie Peterson,the eldest daughter of Mr and Mrs.Peterson..she just hated this peaceful evening cause she just couldn't be with her loved ones for a chit-chat as she is in hostel of university for studies.she is the age of twenty and had the perfect body..slender and tall of about 5"9inch with brown long silky straight hair..she had the eyes of Mrs.Nancy which perfectly matched her barbie nose and her pink lips..But of all she was excited cause after two days she was going back home for holidays.

Then there is Annabeth,the second daughter of Mr and Mrs.Peterson..(she is the main character in this story).she is eighteen and in her final year of high school she is sweet chubby girl,has black curly with just Natalie's complexion and height just that she doesn't have the perfect body like Natalie.
She has the trait of being talkative and the most intelligent in their family only that she has nyctophobia(being scared of dark)
Her family members call her miss Peterson einstein

Then there is Alex,the youngest son of Mr and Mrs.Peterson.The mischievious of their family, the carbon copy of Natalie..he is the age of ten...full of pranks but intelligent.
Annabeth and Alex are like Tom and Jerry no matter how many times they fight they can never be apart it was fun to see them fight and fun to see them defend each other..and Natalie is their Spike..

There is also Mr.Jackson and his family.Mr.Jackson is Mr.peterson's big brother who loves smoking..and it is like he is smoking to live,as normal people breath oxygen to live(am not telling he is not normal but smoking too much was not normal either)who lived 50 km away with his family..And his family consists of Mrs.Thalia jackson,Laura (the daughter to Mr and Mrs.Jackson) She is the same age to Natalie..she has the black wavy shoulder length hair,and she is the copyright to Mrs.Thalia just that Mrs.Thalia is short not too short but Laura is taller than her mom.She is about 6" and has a curvy body..She has an elder brother Chris.who is the famous businessman..he has the six pack body with the perfect jaw and almond shaped brown eyes,he is the age of 24..

Mr.peterson and Mr.Jackson are the children to Mr and Mrs.Thomas and Mr and Mrs.Thomas lives in their farm house (which literally is not a farm house but its a bungalow) in THOMAS VILLAGE (which is named after Mr.Thomas cause he was the messiah to the village) he made the village known and famous.
Mr.Thomas is tall and handsome just like his son Peterson while
Mrs Jane Thomas is beautiful too and you could just see where Natalie got her beauty from.

This holiday the family of Mr.Peterson and Mr.Jackson will go to visit Mr and Mrs.Thomas in THOMAS VILLAGE which they had not visit for almost ten years..As every holiday they either gather up at Mr.Peterson's house or at Mr.Jackson's house.
THEY WERE THE PERFECT FAMILY

Guyz i know its a short chapter but i just thought you needed some character introduction..plus i don't have a cover for the story if anyone can help me with it..It would be great
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