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Hey...
So its uh, been a while since i returned to wattpad..
Took a pretty long break and visited my families in Vietnam.
I also weren't able to write much due to a broken computer and the phone is too small for typing (Currently typing on phone)
I just want to thank you for giving this fic a chance, yet due to its lack of update and lots of you must have moved on already. But the true reason im here is because im saying something any writer should be scared of..

A discontinued story

A discontinued story

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Oh boy...
Im discontinueing this story, ill give you a reason why:
1. First, eve with literally two rewrites during the fic i can even tell as a rookie writer i am missing some prospects and stuff, i felt like all i was doing is just slapping shits in and moving on, sweeping it under the rug was not a good idea as i re-read my story for the 3rd time, and i must say, it lacked a conviction.

2. The story is... boring, even with improved writing starting from the USJ arc i am still feel lacking when its just based on fighting, i took some notes from Water Hashira Descendant (must read), and moved onto AO3 were the site is home to Angsty feeling teens for any sort of on-going romance MHA fics, heck even a Sonic X Mha fic called Footwork (must read) gave me a clear reality check to my writing on just chapter 2.

3. Boyfriend and Girlfriend was kind of overpowered, and all i did was just slamming them in the story, despite the power difference every other characters just look and shrug it off, unrealistic. They barely show much of an interaction and kind of acted like gag characters in conversation as well. Theres just no lore, zero self-written interaction and just dialogues from the main story.

4. Heavily rushed, not to mention how i just assume their powers and go on with it, Girlfriend is simple because her power is based on mostly in her mutated demon form.
Boyfriend on the other hand, way too many abilitties for me to keep track on, have i ever mention that hes actually pretty weak in canon AND in fanon/mods as well, he just didn't die due to his ability to bend opponents into rapping.

5. World building is nonexistent, as to other crossovers fanfic they take realistic seriously, and they used the time on building characters while finding time to sneak in some more while I currently am doing long jumps daily while trying to cross the bridge on a thin rope, thats my situation.
I added way too many characters and being forged on writing and writing ESSAYS doesn't help remember stuff.
Theres more, but im gonna give my hands a good break, ouch the fingers!!

This story is no longer continuing, its been quite fun at least..
The other stories is also on hiatus for a while, anyways ciao.







































































A True rewrite of Demon&Rapper ina world of Heroes is coming soon..
Aphonia Vocalist is its name.

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⏰ Last updated: Jan 29, 2023 ⏰

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