Teenage dirtbag REWRITING

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At your train stop, you sense that someone is watching you.

Oh well, this is Ohio.
You think as you chuckle to yourself.

You put on your headphones and start to play T.V Girl. Now you just needed a place to stay. You've actually got some money saved, about $700-$730 dollars. When walking around, you find an old motel.

YOUR POV

"Hello welcome to Sunshine Motel what can I get for you tonight." the receptionist said with an empty tone.

"Can I get a room?" I ask.

The lady tosses me a key and mutters out "Room 10."

I walk to my room and look around.
The room looked fairly okay except for the fact that there's a person looking at me through the window.

I haven't even been here for an hour. It doesn't even look like a person, it had tendrils out of its back and it was wearing a suit.

Holy shit, that one chic from school was right.

There was only one thing to do.

"Oh my gosh is that Slender Man?"
I say sarcasticly.

THEN THE MOTHER FUCKER TELEPORTS IN MY FUCKING ROOM.

"You shouldn've run away from your mother." a voice states in my head.

"Well I did so that's to late. " I respond.

Then one of his tentacle thingys lash at me. Being an expert on dodgeball a successfully survive.

"Ha! Little do you know, I went through the hell we call High school in 2023!" I taunt.

My dumbass was caught of guard and I was now upside down in the air.

"Well don't just stand there kill me. " I demand.

"Who said that I'm going to kill you? Your coming with me. I sense something about you."

"Can you let me down then. " I ask

Then I get thrown on the bed.

Rude: (

"Get your stuff or I'll drag you there myself."

I grab my backpack. And the kidnapper teleports out the window. I open the window and hop out. Because I don't have teleporting powers.

Then one of the tendrils grab on my arm. Suddenly, I'm now at a random ass house.

Slender man's POV

I am now at the mansion with Y/n.
Usually I wouldn't do something as rash as this, but I sense an entity on them. I also cannot read their mind, I suppose it is because of the entity.

"I didn't know you were a hacker dude."
They say.

"Who's this? " Jane questions as she enters the room.

"This is Y/n, they will be our new Proxy. "

Your POV

I wonder what a" Proxy" is. But honestly I don't care.
The woman who just walked in had long black hair pale skin and a black dress on.

She was pretty.

"So do I need to pay rent? I only have like $700."
Even though Slender man didn't have eyes, I could just feel the look of confusion.

I mean it was a good question.

"No you will stay here for free, but you do need to do stuff." Slender man replied. "The reason you are here is that I sense an entity on you, or growing on you."

Is this fucking Parasite?

"Uhh.. Okay, that's peachy. "

Then something felt weird at the back at my head, like something was growing. My head's skin was being stretched, but it didn't hurt. Just a feeling. There was also voices in my head.

Ughh.

Where am I?

Who are you?

The voices in my head, they felt like Slender. But it wasn't him.

What is actually happening?  I just wanted to stay in a shitty motel.

Then more skin started stretching, but this time it was my neck.

After the feeling stopped, I felt around my head.
I touched the back and.

"Hey! That hurts ya know."