I have been re-writing this story for a while and need help. So imma ask a few questions and based on the feed back I get, will determine the rest of the story because I am still terrible at writing despite me being a Senior in high school.
I know one of the main problems with the story was Y/n was so sensitive to anything and everything and had no traits that made them unique. So the question is: What should Y/n's personality traits be to make them stand out?
The next problem was that they are related to both Sally and Francesco. I honestly don't know what I was thinking (I obviously wasn't). So should Y/n be related to Sally, Francesco or not be related to anyone and one of them is a close friend?
Third; Should Y/n be gender neutral so anyone can read and not have to make their brain change the pronouns?
I also learned not to specify the sponsor Y/n drives for because a lot of y'all ended up changing it anyways so.... That's that.
I also needed help with Y/n's back story. Like do they have a decent family? Shitty one? What's their nationality, or do I leave that to the reader to pick?
I just finally want to finish this and move on to my other stories that I want to write. Which is one about me and my childhood friend gets sent back to the 1700s (Hamilton is still a phase I'm stuck in). A few other obsessions of mine are FNAF, Descendants, OUAT, ect. Mostly me clinging on to my childhood. Yeah, so please help me, I'm begging y'all!
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Lightning McQueen x Reader
FanfictionY/n is from Australia but has a brother from Italy. She wants to be a race car driver and be the first ever female to win the piston cup. She becomes friends with Lightning and may have fallin' for him. But will a crash ruin their friendship or will...
