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3rd person POV

All there is nothing but blackness, emptiness devoid of anything, no living creatures or objects, just the blackness of nothingness that stretches infinitely.

??? POV

Where am I? Mom? Dad? Grandma? Uncle? Anyone, please answer me. I don't want to be alone, please, anyone, please.......

No one answered my call. I open my eyes to see nothing but blackness and emptiness surrounding me and feel myself in a curling position, but I notice my hand is.... not made of any organic materials, just a golden flame that's shaped like a human hand. I went to touch my face, only to feel it has no features.......nothing...... I can still feel my face, but it's flat like someone's breast, and I felt a white liquid dripping down my featureless face and realized I was alone, no mom, no dad, no nothing, just loneliness, and I felt more and more tears dripping down my face.

3rd person Pov

The golden flame-like being drifts alone in the void, leaving only a trail of tears.

??? Pov

I want to go home to mom, dad, and grandma. I don't want to be alone like this.





Criticism is welcome here and I want to improve my writing

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