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Raavi bolti h to use saas lene me dikkat hoti h to rishita uske lie pani lati h

Rishita :- raavi pani pi le teri tbyt kharab ho jaegi 

Raavi rishita ko dekhti h rishita pleed with eyes so raavi drink water

Dhara :- raavi tu jo samjh rhi h esa nhi h bachcha hum sb tujhse bohat pyar krte h 

Goutam :- hn raavi hum mante h humse galti ho gai hume maaf kr de dubara esa nhi hoga

Suman :- hn markundi tu glt samajh rhi h hum tujhse bohat pyar krte h 

Raavi (Starts Laughing) :- ha ha are aap sb ese ky dekh rhe ho haso kaki ne kitna achcha joke mara h chalo kaki man lia aap sb mujhse pyar krte ho to me aapse kuch sawal puchti hu agar aap sb ne uske jawab de die to me shiva se shadi kr lungi doge aap sab mujhe jawab

Everyone nodded 

Raavi :- thik h to kaki aapse hi suru krte h aap khti ho na aap mujhse pyar krti ho aapne mujhe apne ghar ka hissa mana h (suman nodded) to btaiye aapne mera naam markundi rakha rishita ka patrani or dhara di ko bhagodi ki beti khti ho na to aap apne beto ko ky bulate ho (suman confused) nhi samjh aaya me samjhati hu aapko bura lgta h na jb masi shiva ko gavar bolti h ya koi or apke beto ko kuch bolta h jese ek baar janardhan uncle ne goumbi ko kuch glt bola tha tb aapko bura lga tha na (Suman nodded) to jb aap kisi or ki beti ko ese naam se bulate ho to unhe kesa lgta hoga socha h dhara di ki maa kitne time phle bhag gai thi usme dhara di ki galti nhi thi phir bhi aap tk unhe BKB bulate ho unhe kitna bura lgta hoga socha h mana rishita bade se ghar se aai h pr vo is ghar me achchi trh ghul mil gai h phir bhi aap use patrani bulate ho pta h isse ky lgta h ki rishita bohat nakhre krti h or aapko preshan krti h balki usne aapke lie khud ko pura change kr dia h phir bhi aaj tk aap use patrani bolte ho or mujhe markundi me janna chahti hu kaki ki q aapne mujhe markundi bulana suru kia tha islie ki mene aapke bete k mere character pr sawal uthane k baad use sunaya tha or aap sb k kehene pr bhi is rishte ko bachane ki kosis nhi ki hena (suman nodded)  to ese aapko apne bete ko bhi kuch naam dena chahie jisne apne gusse me najane kitni baar meri beizzati ki h usko bhi koi naam dedo aapka dusra deta to mujhe mandav pr chod gya tha use bhi koi naam dedo dia aapne (suman nodded no) nhi na chalo man lia ye aapke bete h to pyar jyada krna banta h pr aapne to mujhe kbhi dhara di or rishita jitna pyar bhi nhi kia jb dhara di ko insecurity hui thi goumbi ko lekr jb unhe lga tha ki goumbi unhe dhoka de rhe h aapne ky kia goumbi ko mara tha na qki unhone aapki dhara ko dard dia tha (suman nodded ) to jb shiva mere hote hue kisi or ldki k sath sagai kr rha, pure somnath k samne comptition me part le rha tha tb aapne use q nhi roka q usko or badava dia q us samay aapne mera dard nhi samjha kaki rishte me pyar ho na ho pr koi bhi ldki apne pati ko kisi or ke sath nhi dekh sakti chahe vo apne pati se nafrat q na kre (suman down her head) chalo man lia aap gussa thi pr kis baat pr qki mene aapke bete ki beizzati ki use sabke samne thappad mara hena  (suman nodded in down head ) to aapne ye gussa kbhi rishita ko q nhi dikhaya jbki usne to kai baar dev ki beizzaati ki h aapke samne somnath k samne pr aapne use itni badi saza nhi di jo mujhe di jabki mera gussa jayaz tha phir bhi ky ye hi h aapka pyar ky aap ab bhi mante ho ki aapne mujhe is ghar ki bahu are bahu chodo apna bhi mana tha kbhi (suman didnt reply just keep her head down)

Raavi :- ab aap dhara di aap mujhe apni behen manti ho na or claim krti ho aap mujhse pyar krti ho (dhara nodded holding raavi) to jb aapko dev ki girlfriend ka pta chala tb aapne humari shadi q nhi roki balki aap rishita k ghar chali gai uska hath dev k lie mangne pr aapne mujhe sach btana q jruri nhi samjha aapne ek baar bhi ye nhi socha ki jb dev ne mujhe choda uske baad mera ky hota ye pura somnath janta h ki jb anita di ne goumbi ko mandap pr choda tha uske baad aaj tk unki shadi nhi ho pai to aapne q nhi socha ki jb dev mujhe chodta to meri bhi shadi nhi hogi kbhi kisi se koi bhi ldka mujhse shadi nhi krega are man lia anita di ne glti ki thi unke uski saza mil rhi h pr mera ky meri ky glti thi ya aap mujhse goumbi ka badla lelna chahti thi jese anita di ne goumbi ko choda vese dev se mujhse mandap me chudvakr mujhse badla lena chahti aap (dhara get shocked and leave raavi hands newer in the time pandya thinks like this they realise some where they all are at fault on raavi's condition and her situation) uske baad jb rishita aai to aapne meri or shiva ki shadi fix kra di ek baar bhi socha ki vo ldki jise aap apni choti behen mante ho vo kese rahegi ek ese insan k sath jisse vo or jo usse itn nafrat krta ho ki unke nafrt k kisse pure somnath me mashhoor ho (dhara and all pandya just listning raavi's question down her head) are jb mene aapse apne rishte k lie madad mangi mene kha ki aap shiva ko samjhao jb vo sarab pi kr aaya tha to aapne kha ki ye mera or mere pati ka matter h ise hum khud sambhale or jb hum dono is rishte me nhi rhna chahte the or alag ho rhe the aap aa gai hum dono ko rishta bachane q dhara di bolo chod dia tha na aapne hume humare haal pr to q aai baad me is rishte ko bachane q mujhe esa feel kraya ki me glt hu q aap mujhe ese toxic rishte me rakhna chahti thi jisme meri koi value nhi thi jha mujhe apman or tane k alava kbhi kuch nhi milta 

(Raavi went to shiva )

Raavi :- shiva tu to jana jata h na apno k lie duniya se ldne k lie tu jisse pyar krta h uske lie tu puri duniya se ld jata h na (shiva nodded his head bow down) or tu ye  bhi khta h tu mujhse pyar krta h to tu kbhi mere lie q nhi lada kisi se jb koi dhara di ya goumbi ko kuch bolta h tu ld jata h usse yha tk k tu kaki ko bhi bolta h unhe kuch glt nhi bolne ko to tune aaj tk kbhi mere lie stand q nhi lia q tb kaki se kuch nhi bola jb vo mujhe roz tane deti thi teri ldai to mujhse thi na to q tune tb kaki ko nhi roka jb vo mujhe ganda khoon kh rhi thi mere mata piita ko itna kuch kh rhi thi tb q nhi roka tune unhe q nhi kha ki isme mere ma or baba ki ky glti thi are kaki chod jb pura somnath mujhe pta nhi ky ky bol rha tha tune to unhe bhi kbhi chup nhi kraya meri beizzati ho rhi thi mere character pr na jane ky ky bola ja rha tha pr tu chup chap sun rha tha ye tha tera pyar new vale din tune mujhse kha tha ki agar me dhara di k against gai to humara rishta khatam jb ki me dhara di se naraz thi bs unko hurt nhi kia tha mene hena (shiva nodded) pr ab to dhara di mujhe hurt kia h mujhse bina puche mujhe sarab pilai h ye ante hue ki mujhe sarab se kitni nafart h sb ko pta h mujhe sarab or sarab pine vale logo se sakhat nafrat h to mujhe sarab pilane k baad kisi ne nhi socha ki mujhe khud se nafrat ho skti me khud ko kuch kr skti hu agar ye hi chiz mene dhara di k sath ki hoti mene dhara di ko zabardasti sarab pilai hoti to ky tu mujhe kuch nhi bolta ese hi jane deta h nhi na (shiva nodded in no) to dhara di ko q nhi kuch kha tune bol na shiva (shiva is silent including all pandya because they know raavi is right ) dega saza apni ma or apni bhabhi ma ko us ldki ko hurt krne k lie jisse tu pyar krne ka dava krta h

Raavi :- aap sb btao abhi bhi dava krte ho ki aap sbne mujhe kbhi apna mana aap log mujhse pyar krte ho 

Rishita :- raavi tu jo kh rhi h sahi h pr yrr mene ky kia h mene to tujhe humesha support kia h tujhse pyar kia h hn suru me dif... (cutted by raavi)

Raavi :- tumhari kbhi koi glti nhi thi rishita suru me hum dono ek dusre ko nhi jante the to problem or ldai hona jayaz h pr ek tum hi ho jisne is ghar me humesha mera sath dia h pr sach kahu tum khud bhi kbhi is ghar ki nhi bn pai hn manti hu ab tum bhi is ghar ka part ho pr uske lie tumhare pass tumhare pati ka support tha pr mere pass to kbhi vo support nhi tha to kis haq se is ghar me aau kese man lu ki ye family jo 24 saal me mujhe nhi apna pai mujhse pyar nhi kr pai vo aage kbhi bhi mujhe apna paegi tum btao rishita ky tum meri jagah hoti to tum dev se dubara shadi krti 

Rishita back down and nodded in no

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So guys ye part yhi khatam hota h kesa lga aapko ye part mujhe comment me btae

To be honest is story ko likhte time mujhe lga ki raavi k kuch sawal to bante h kuch baate to h jisse mujhe lgta tha kisi ne usse pyar nhi kia ya ye sawal atleast raavi ko puchne chahie the sb se to mene likh die

And Note ki is story me koi bhi white or black nhi h sb grey character h like in real life but 2nd shadi tk raavi ne esa kuch nhi kia tha jo glt ho meri nazar me may be i m rong pr usne humesha pandya ko pyar dia apne rishte me efforts dale h pr use kbhi kuch return me nhi mila

Or aapko ky lgta h aage ky hoga ky shiva or baki sb ko apni glti ka ehsas hoga please comment kr ke btaiye

Or iska next part Wednesday ko post krungi till then be healthy , happy and spread love

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