Shivi vala love

Suman - dev

Continue from the previous part 

Sb apne room me hote h suman darshan ki photo se baat kr rhi hoti h tbhi dev aata h

Dev :- Maa

Suman dev ki trf dekhti h or use apne pass bulati h or dev suman k god me sir rakh kr beth jata h 

Suman :- ae dev ky hua beta kis baat se preshan h bta mujhe (pyar se uska matha sehlate hue)

Dev :- maa tune janadhan ko humare sath rukne k lie q bulaya h tu janti h na usne humare sath ky kia h 

Suman :- tujhe pta h kisi bhi ma baap k lie sbse bada failure ky hota h ki uske bachche khush na ho agar kbhi bhi unke bachcho ko sacrifice krna pde or tu khud soch ki janardhan ka ghar or humare ghar me kitna farak h vo to patrani thi jisne itna adjust kia sirf tere pyar k lie pr uske ma baap thodi krege unke lie to unki beti sacrifice kr rhi h or koi bhi maa baap esa thodi chahege

Dev :- to ma unhe kisne hq dia humari insult krne ka hum pr chillane ka 

Suman :- achcha tu ek baat bta jb bhagodi ki beti ko apna room tum logo ko dekr bahar sona pd rha tha tb uska bhai bhi to aaya tha na or kitna sunaya tha goumbi ko tb to tumne hardik ko kuch nhi kha usse to nhi lde tum ki usne tumhare bade bhai ki beizzati kese ki pta h q nhi lde (dev apni ma ko confusingly dekhta h) qki tumne suru se dhara ko apna mana h is ghar ka hissa maana or islie uska dard or uske tyag tumhe dikhe or bs  islie tumhe hardik ki baate buri nhi lgi balki uski baate sahi lgi or tum sb bhaiyo ne milkar dhara ka kamra bnaya pr ek baat bta tune ya tere bhaiyo ne rishita k lie ky kia jb se vo aai h us bachchi ne bs sactifice kia h apne ghar valo or humari ldai me vo bachchi pisi h ky kbhi kisi ne uska ye dard dekha jb vo humare ghar aai usne ky manga tha ek saperate bathroom pr humne ky kia use suna dia kha ki use parivar k sath rhna nhi aata or pta nhi ky ky pr agar tum sb bhai dhara k lie kamra bna skte ho to ky rishita k lie ek bathroom tyyar nhi kra skte the dekh dev me unhone jo kia use defend nhi kr rhi unhone jo kia apne bachchi k pyar k lie kia tha, unka dar thha ki unki bachchi ko yha taklif ho rhi h vo sacrifice kr rhi h or humne bhi unka dar sahi sabit kia na humari vjah se us phol se bachchi ne kitne sacrifice kie h bina jatae beta jo beet gya hum use badal nhi skte pr aage vo glti na ho ye kosis kr skte h mene 4 beto ki maa hone k ghamand me kbhi bhi raavi or rishita ko is ghar ka hissa nhi mana or na hi hum bna pai, jb khud k bachche ki glti thi tb bhi us bachchiyo ko sunaya pr ab nhi ab mere lie bete or bahue sb barabar h (little chuckcle) ek beti khokar ehsas hua apni glti ka pr ab me apni dusri bachchi nhi khoungi dhara me bohat sehenshilta h or sath hi uske pass uske pati, dever or uske maeka ka sath h me ye nhi khti ki rishita me sehenshilta nhi h pr dekha jae to vo akeli h yha phle raavi thi uske sath pr jb se vo gai h rishita sb k sath hue bhi akeli pd gai h or ye sbse jyada dard deta h or ab me apni ek bachchi ko kho chuki hu ab dusri bachchi nhi khoungi dev beta humne raavi k sath bohat glt kia h or sayad uski maafi bhi nhi milni chahie pr ye bhi sach h ki humne rishita k sath bhi km glt nhi kia h or uski maai mangne se kuch nhi hoga hume use sahi krna hoga tbhi to hum raavi ko ya kisi bhi or ldki ko is ghar me aane layak ghar bna paege 

Dev :- maa tu sahi kh rhi h humne kbhi raavi or rishita ko is ghar ka hissa mana hi nhi humesha unhe bhabhi se km hi rakha or sayad yhi vjah h ki raavi hu sb ko chod kr chali gai h pr ma agar vo kbhi vapas nhi aai to 

Suman :- to koi baat nhi tb bhi vo humari bachchi rhegi or uski vjah se jo bhi is ghar me or ghar k logo me change aaega specially mujh me jo change aaega me use sambhal kr rakhungi taki kbhi agar raavi apni maa ko na shi pr kaki ko maaf kr ske

Dev smile or thodi der ese hi dono maa bete baat krte h 

raavi garden me bethi hoti h use Om dekh leta h ho undar se kuch lekr vapas aata h 

Om (forwarding something) :- akele akele ky soch rhi h (raavi confusingly use dekhti h) zeher nhi h neebu pani h bs pi sakti h (sitting beside her) vese bhi tu maa ki favorite beti h agar tujhe ek kharoch bhi di to unhone mujhe ghar se nikal dena h(raavi kuch nhi bolti) vese me ek achcha listner hu (raavi uski trf dekhti h) dekh raavi i know tere shiva or uski family k beech me jo hua sab ko pta h or me ye bhi samjhta hu ki jo hua uske baad kisi pr bhi bharosha krna or kisi ko bhi apni problem share krna easy nhi h or mujhse to bilkul nhi jise tu kuch dino se janti h or jiska pandya's se direct relation h phir bhi agar tujhe kbhi bhi lge ki tu mujhse kuch share krna chahti hya agar share bhi nhi tu chahe ki koi tere sath chup chap betha rhe ghanto tk to me hu me tera ek achcha or sachcha dost bnne ki puri kosis krungi i promise (patting his hand on her head)

then dono nibu pani pite h or scene enjoy krte h 

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So guys ye part yhi khatam hota h aapko ye kesa lga please mujhe comment me btae mujhe kuch jyada suja nhi to jo dimag me bakwas aai mene vo likh di

As I dont know bs mn me jo aaya likh dia i know ye episode shivi pr nhi tha pr somehow i feel pandya ne sirf raavi k sath nhi rishita k sath bhi glt kia h or me manti hu agar vo sach me raavi k lie guily h to rishita k sath glti sudhar kr vo ye proof kr skte h

Guys aapko ky lgta h ye jo nae log aane vale h ky role play krege humare shivi ki life me

next episodes graph

2 - dev - rishita

1 - krish

1 - goutam

2 - dhara 

1 - shiva

3 - shivi and raavi decision

guys i need some help from you guys

1. Next 2 episode dev - rishita pr hoge or unke relation pr raavi k sath i would like to know your suggetion ki dev & rishita aap alag alag episode chahoge ya ek hi

2. i m thinking that if you like me dhara ko bhi sahi dikhane ka soch rhi hu not like complete white wash but guilt and remorse

So above dono points me aap ky prefer krege please comment

And If i hurt anyone's Feeling so i m really sorry

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Shruti