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Dhara 2

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Dhara  :- pr hum esa krege kese 

Goumbi :- raavi ko bharosha dilane se phle hume rishita se maafi mangni chahie jese humne raavi k sath glt kia vese hi na chahte hue humari family ne rishiat k sath bhi glt kia h use is family ka hissa mana nhi phle to hume humamre ghar k bachcho ko samjhana hoga ki humare ghar ki baki bahue bhi is ghar ka part h or har chiz ko jaana uski respect krna unka haq h dhara raavi k vapas pane k lie phle hume ye make sure krna hoga ki jo gltiya hume ki h hum use sudhare or uske lie phle rishita ka hume maaf krna jruri h 

Dhara :-(about to leave) hn to chalo abhi chal kr rishita se maafi mangte  h  

Goumbi :- (holding her hands) ye hi to glt h dhara time dekh raat ho rhi h 

Dhara ;- pr goumbi 

Goumbi :- dhara tere bachche bade ho chuke h unki shadi ho chuki h unhe bhi unki privacy de humare ghar tutne ka ek ye bhi reason h jo tu har baat pr apna haq samjh kr bachcho ki ldai k beech me ghus jati h isi vajah se humare dono bachcho ki shadi me problem aai specially shiva- raavi

Dhara :- ky mtlb goumbi tum khne ky chahte ho clear bolo 

Goumbi :- dekh dhara dev- rishita ki shadi unki marji se hui thi phir bhi kai baar rishita k sahi hote hue dev uske against tha usne humesha tujhe upar rakha jiski vjah se unki shadi shuda jindagi me problem aai vo to rishita apna haq mangna janti h or islie usne humesha apne haq ki ldai ki or sayad islie dev ne bhi ek point k baad apni patni ka sath dena use samjhna suru kia or vhi agar hum dekhe to shiva or raavi ki shadi unki marji k bina hui thi dono jani dushman the or islie jb bhi koi mushibat aai vo tere pass aae or islie kbhi unka rishta majbut nhi ho paya tujhe yaad h new year k time jb raavi gussa thi qki humne use nhi btaya tha plan k baare me vo bachchi tb sahi thi phir bhi vo apna gussa nhi dikha pai q qki tb bhi humne uske gusse ki vjah nhi samjhi or tb bhi shiva ne raavi ka gussa samjhne ki kosis nhi ki or tera us samay unke beech me bolna unki ldai ko or bada dia tha 

Dhara :- pr goumbi isme meri ky glti thi me to apne bachche ki madad kr rhi thi or rahi baat raavi ki to us samay jb sb thik ho gya tha to use bhi baat bhul jani chahie thi na shiva maafi mang rha tha 

Goumbi :- maafi me bhi mang rha tha tujhse dhara jb mene tere permission k bina humara baby drop kia tha tune kia tha maaf nhi na to raavi se kese ummid kr skti h jbki us samay humare plan ki vjah se raavi ki jaan ja skti thi 

Dhara :- pr goumbi humne nhi kha tha na use us janardhan seth k ghr jane k lie usme uski bhi glti thi use vha nhi jana chahie tha vo kitna rishkie tha

Goumbi :- rishqie to tera plan bhi tha phir bhi sb mane the na tu q nhi samjhti h jese tu is ghar ka hissa h vese raavi or rishita bhi h or vo bhi is ghar se or iske sadasyo se pyar krti h jruri nhi h tera idea sahi ho pr un bachchio ka glt dhara ye bachchiya bhi is ghar se pyar krti h or inhone ye baar baar proof kia h or uske baad bhi agar inhe ye security nhi milti ki ye is ghar ka hissa h to inka gussa jayaj h 

Dhara is scilent for while pr uski aankho se aanshu aane lgte h

Dhara (hugging goumbi) :- mujhse kitni badi galti ho gai goumbi me kbhi samajh hi nhi pai m=ki meri vjah se mere bachcho k beech problem aa rhi h meri vjah se raavi or rishita k mn me insecurity aa rhi h i m sorry goumbi 

Goumbi :- (hugged her back) dhara jo ho gya hum use badal nhi skte pr esa dubara na ho kosis kr skte h na 

Dhara :-(parting from hug) hn goumbi me vada krti hu me apni limit yaad rakhungi or raavi, rishita ko unka haq or unki jagah dungi or unse maafi bhi mangungi

Goumbi :- dhara sirf maafi mangne se kuch suna h na action speak lowder than words to tujhe even hum sb ko un bachchio ko jatana hoga ki vo is ghar ka hissa h hum sb unse pyar krte h or unke decision uski thought ki value krte h 

Dhara smiled and hug him

Other side

Shiva chat pr hota h or kisi se baat kr rha hota h 

Shiva :- sb sahi se ho gya gouri bhabhi ki pehli rashoi bhi achche se ho gai bs ek kmi thi tu yha nhi thi kash tu bhi yha hoti chipkali gouri bhabhi kitni baar puch rhi thi tere baare me 

Flashback

At wedding night raavi texted shiva to meet her

Shiva vha aata h dono thodi der aashman ko dekhte h 

Raavi :- tera letter mila tu sach me sorry h jo bhi tune kia 

Shiva :- sirf sorry nhi hu raavi me janta hu jo bhi mene kia uski maafi nhi h tu jo saza dena chahe mujhe manjur h bs mujhse nafrat mt kr 

Raavi :- shiva me tujhse natrat nhi kr skti or jo kuch bhi hua me use nhi bhula skti pr phir bhi khi na khi me bhi glt thi humare rishte me humesha dusro ko aane dia or uska reason tha ki humne kbhi ek dusre ko bharosha nhi dilaya or islie me is rishte ko aakhri chance dena chahti hu or uske lie hume suru se suru krna hoga phle dosti se suru krte h

Shiva :- tu mere life me kitni important h vo tere meri life se jaane k baad pta chala raavi ab to teri dosti bhi manjur h me stage pr rhne k lie tyyar hu bs tu mujhse nafrat mt krna me teri suri bardast kr skta hu pr teri nafrat nhi

Raavi :- to ye locket me apne paas rakh rhi hu jb bhi hum is stage se aage badne ko tyyar ho jaege tb me ise phen lungi 

Shiva smiled

Flashback end

Raavi :- hn gouri ka call aaya tha aaj bta rhi thi ky ky hua me bhi vha aana chahati thi shiva pr job bhi jruri h na 

Shiva ;- nhi raavi job phle jruri h or baat trip ki h to jb bhi tujhe chutti milegi ek baar hum sb phir aa jaege ghumne 

They continue their talk

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So guys ye part yhi khatam hota h aapko ye kesa lga please mujhe comment me btae mujhe kuch jyada suja nhi to jo dimag me bakwas aai mene vo likh di

So guys Dhara ne glti ki h pr vo bhi hurt thi use white wash nhi kr rhi but dhara ko apni glti ka ehsas dilana jruri h and dhara ne baki character se jyada glt kia h to i think uska redemtion thoda achcha hona chahie 

And ab next part se shivi ki story suru hogi or sb ka redemtion bhi so i hope aapko pasand aae

And If i hurt anyone's Feeling so i m really sorry

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