an old oneshot fic i wrote for my 7th grade creative writing assignment, pt 1

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Get ready for one of the cringiest things you will ever read!

To be honest actually it's not that bad, but the fact that I submitted it for a grade takes out any redeeming quality it has... Anyways, I will be kind of blind reacting alongside you, the reader, because I haven't read one of my old stuff ever since I wrote it lolol. I will leave comments as parentheseses throughout, so yeah.

I'll start with the shortest one, it's about Toilet-Bound Hanako-kun, and it also includes my OC Yuna— yeah it might feel cringy because of that as well. One thing I gotta explain about Yuna is that She's an excorcist. The eorcist part of her family comes from her dad's side. She's also Nene's cousin and their moms are siblings. So, Nene has nothing to do w/ the exorcism stuff. Anyways, enjoy I guess!!

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GHOST BIKE

    At first, we thought it was just another bike but then...

    Hello! I'm Nene Yashiro, and I want to tell you about an adventure me and my friends had about a week ago. But, I can't just start from the middle of it. I have to tell you from the start.
(Honestly if I hadn't had to start from the prompt sentence at the top I could have made this opening way better lmao)

    That morning was like all our other mornings. Me and my cousin Yuna walked inside the gates of the school, went inside the building to my classroom and our bags on our desks. Then, me, my best friend Aoi and my cousin Yuna started chatting about usual stuff.

    "Oh guys! Have you heard?" Aoi asked, looking at us with her indigo eyes. Normally when she asks this though, it's never a good sign. "There's a new rumor going around."

    "Really? What is it?" Yuna asked her.

    "I heard that there is a bike, somewhere in our school, that is possessed by a ghost. It follows you but will run away if you come close to it. And if you try to catch it, they say something terrible will happen!"

    "What's the terrible thing?" I asked her.

    "Well, some people say it kills you, while others say it makes you dissapear, oh, and, I heard someone got lost trying to chase it!"

    "Well that's creepy..."

(Well that was short— WHERE IS THE DESCRIPTION, PAST ME WHY)

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    That day was also a toilet-cleaning day, meaning me, Yuna and Kou-kun was supposed to clean the 3rd floor girl's bathroom inside the old building, a.k.a Hanako-kun's bathroom. We met up at the place.
(were* what happened to the grammar lol)

    "Why do we have to clean this place?" Yuna complained, squinting her blue eyes. "I mean no one actually comes here, so how is it supposed to get dirty?"
(She has a point)

    "Less chit-chat, more work, Masako." Hanako-kun told her. Placing a card down from his hand before fixing his black hat.

    "How come you get to play with the Mokke while we work?!" She said again, tucking a piece of her long black hair behind her ear. 

    "Hey, Yashiro." Hanako-kun said, totally ignoring her, as the Mokke then placed a card down.
(LMAO THE WAY I MADE HIM FALT-OUT IGNORE YUNA)

    "Yes, Hanako-kun?"

    "You heard about the ghost bike, right?" He looked into my magenta eyes with his amber ones.

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