Five Out of Five - Why Don't We

Author's Note & Extra Scenes

Sooooo this book hit 5000 reads! Yay!!

As a thank you for all the support, here are some additional scenes I wrote. These were all written last year when I started the book. The story changed A LOT over the course of me writing it so I didn't end up using them. But I still wanted people to see them :)

Most of them don't exactly fit the timeline or story anymore. Also most of them end kinda suddenly because I just never finished them. But they're still kinda fun. I may or may not take some scenes and adapt them to be in my smut book. We'll see.

Enjoy!

The Original Big Reveal:

[This scene had been my plan for a long time but after I wrote the chapter where Jack admits he loves Kira, I decided to majorly change the ending. In this version, Zach and Kira had sex while everyone was out of the house. When they finished, he told her he loved her and she freaked out. The rest of the guys got home just as she comes downstairs.]

"Kira! Kira, please don't go! Can we please just talk about it?" Zach came down the stairs behind Kira. While she'd managed to put a shirt on, Zach was only in his underwear. He paused when he saw all the others in the kitchen.

"No!" Kira yelled without looking back at him. "I need to get out of here."

Jack stepped in front of her before she could get past them all. He put his hands on her shoulders and looked at her with concern. The rest of the guys walked closer and looked hesitantly between Kira and Zach. Meanwhile, Zach finally made his way down the stairs and he walked toward the group.

"Kira, what's wrong?" Jack asked quietly. He rubbed her arms. "What happened?"

"Nothing. Just let me go." Kira tried to pull out of Jack's grip.

"Kira!" Zach said again as he made it over to the others. He tried reaching for her, but Jack pulled her away.

"Why are you in your underwear?" Daniel asked Zach, but his question was lost in everything else going on.

Jack looked at Zach and then he turned his attention back to Kira. She wouldn't look at him, so he placed his hand gently on her face and tilted her head up.

"Did Zach go too far? Did he hurt you?" Jack whispered.

"Jack, I've told you he's never hurt me," Kira said with an aggravated sigh.

"What the hell, man? What kind of question is that?" Zach asked.

"An important one," Jack said menacingly. His hands still held Kira gently, but his furious gaze was on Zach. "I've heard in detail what you like to do to her and I like to make sure it isn't crossing a line."

"Do you really think I'd ever hurt her? That I'd treat her badly?" Zach was furious now too and Kira was looking between them while the others watched in confusion.

"Well I know for a fact that I treat her a hell of a lot better than you do," Jack said.

"What are you talking about?" Zach asked.

Jonah tried stepping between them.

"Ok, I think we all need to calm down-" Jonah said.

"I started sleeping with her before you ever did." Jack glared at Zach, but there was also something else in his expression. He was gloating. "Remember those hickey's on Kira's neck the first time you had sex? Those were from me."

"Oh my god," Kira muttered. She pulled back from Jack and stepped away from the group. Jonah put a comforting hand on her shoulder while she rubbed her face. "This is all falling apart."