Thank you so much for reading our story! We know, we've been inconsistent with our publishing, there's been both huge and tiny gaps in between chapter publishing.
That's because we were busy.
Doing things that mattered in our lives.
What we have published here is just the very first draft of Mirae Walkers, and over the summer we are going to be completely revising and editing it into what we want it to be.
Our hope is to actually finish Mirae Walkers, submit it to professional editors, and begin publishing the series.
That's right, you heard us.
We're turning this into a series. Why the frick else would we have an Epilogue?
Anyways, there's loads of errors, inconsistencies, canonized and de-canonized things, confusing writing changes, over-described and under-described events/scenes, unnecessary gore, a REALLY strange ending, and generally feels incomplete.
That will be fixed over the summer.
It might take us a month, it might take us until the middle of next year, but we WILL be making Mirae Walkers into what it should be: a beautiful story full of changing scenery, characters, and something that inspires people.
It's been amazing so far with how fun Mirae Walkers was to write, you can probably tell that we both LOVE writing fight scenes and much, much gore. It is so beyond fun to write, especially when we're sitting next to each other and don't know what the other is thinking of writing. A lot of it is unnecessary, though, and we understand that not everybody enjoys things like that. So we'll fix it when we can.
(Transition to Nev)
I know that it has only been a short while since Harper and I created this account to try and get feedback on our story (*cough cough* we can't even force our friends to read it ONCE *cough cough*) and even though Mirae Walkers is currently really, really bad, it's been really fun to be like: "I wrote something that I think is cool, I wonder what other people will think about it!" and actually be able to publish it on a public platform that millions of people use!
Except like nobody has read it, which I completely understand! Currently there are about 260-ish reads on Mirae Walkers, but half of them are Harper and I reading through the chapters for errors or things we would want to fix.
Hopefully somebody discovers this and tells their friends about it, and I hope they really do like it.
Except this version sucks please don't share this version unless you know somebody that would legitimately be interested in reading something so bad LoL. But if there are any suggestions, and Harper and I CANNOT say this enough,
*inhale*
PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS ON THINGS THAT CONFUSE YOU OR THINGS THAT NEED TO BE FIXED. NEITHER OF OUR FEELINGS WILL BE HURT BECAUSE YOU POINTED OUT A MICROSCOPIC MISTAKE IN OUR WRITING.
Ugh, that hurt my throat.
Anyways!
(Transition to Harper)
I do sincerely hope you enjoyed Mirae Walkers in its... first draft... glory...
Though it may not look like we've been doing much, we have both been doing work on Mirae Walkers, and have already started from the Prologue to rewrite everything you've read (assuming you did not skip other things.) I welcome anyone to come back and check often, as not only are we going to publish a second draft, but also a version where the gore is cut down and the story is brought out.
Like Nev said, share it with your friends if you think they should see it. And by golly, it's a first draft, and we both find ourselves BEGGING for feedback. I won't kill my voice over it, but I will emphasize that we value literally any feedback.
Thank you for reading! We appreciate you!
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Mirae Walkers
Fantasy*THIS STORY IS NOT RATED MATURE DUE TO BEING LEWD OR SMUTTY. IT IS RATED MATURE BECAUSE OF HOW DISTURBING AND DESCRIPTIVE IT CAN BE AT TIMES DURING INTENSE SEQUENCES.* Chapters with a decent to heavy amount of violence or dark themes will look like...
