Lost Souls (testing story)

Splendor vs Offender idea concept

- Make Splendorman have a 'creepy' side and then use that personality to kill Offenderman. The main character have the job to convince Splendorman and 'lure' Offenderman so that Splendorman can kill him easily. (Btw Splendorman maybe the oldest and Offenderman the youngest in this story, just to exist some angst into the story)

The angst: Splendorman have the heart of the innocence, forgives everybody that used to sin themselves in the past but of course... That 'forgiveness' and 'empathy' have its limits. That is when Offenderman born in the Slender family. That is when Splendorman question his own actions and he tried to make Offenderman stop luring women into their territory but the young immature brother wouldn't listen. They both kept on arguing to the point when Offender tried to ra-- Splendor but luckily, he escaped and both of them forced to isolate from eachother by Slenderman's and Zalgo's order (Offenderman actually work for Zalgo btw so that can explain his... Stupid behavior and low morality)

(Btw I made Offenderman attempt to r--- his own brother is because to show the readers how awful this type of monster can be and the dark side of reality. The scene/situation is so disturbing to Splendorman, to be chased by his own terrible youngest brother and having the anxiety/panic attack after hiding from Offenderman as he's looking for his oldest brother. It's already bad to have this kind of experience, let alone if Offenderman actually did it. This is also the reason to let the readers to give the sa survivor respect and support them, reminding how the victim struggles with their trauma, we have to appreciate how strong and patient they are for making this far in their lives.)

Zalgo be able to force Offenderman to not... Offend anybody from the human world and do it in the demon world instead. However, Offenderman be able to still... Whispers somethings into immature men's ears, causing the people in the human world do something similar to his bad deeds(this is also where I have to play around with psychology and understand human nature better). Unlike most human, Offenderman's nature is to literally offend and fuck people because in his mind, lust and pleasure is literally his needs, not a want. He need to f--- in order to live like how humans need food & water, whatever that means. Of course, that doesn't excuse his action, I'm just explaining the 'logic' behind this creep.

Anyways, back to Splendorman, his brother is a criminal and he tries to turn a blind eye because he simply cannot imagine a family member being such a... Hideous freak. Offenderman is such a disgrace and dishonor, even a real loser in the whole family. Even this page can be controversial the moment his name is written. The family didnt even want him yet he still exist and refuse to die. Offenderman get help from Zalgo which is why they cannot kill him immediately, he still even chilling in Zalgo's lair and the demon realm.

Splendorman tries to escape from even the mention of his own youngest brother but of course, that simply won't do. He want justice for the victim yet he can only do less because in truth, Splendorman is just a friendly ghost. Because of monster similar like Offenderman, Sally exist in the creepypasta realm. Splendorman's anger became too intense to the point when this is the first time that his 'creepypasta' side awakened and hunt for predators and creeps in the human world. He's not suppose to be a creepypasta because he's originally a 'happypasta' but being part of the Slender family, he would turn into this eerie personality when it's necessary.

Splendorman discussed this issue with his fellow slender brothers(Slenderman and Trenderman) but both of them seems to hesitate. Not because of Offenderman but because of Zalgo. The strenghs of Zalgo and the Slenderman is the same, no matter how many wars they fought, both of them win. To defeat Zalgo, they need more support other than the creepypastas, somebody human that have powers(?)... The main character!(No not the mary sue one)

Well, not really having a real war but rather a distraction. High difficulty distraction. It will took some time and effort to kill Offenderman that roams in Zalgo's lair. Slenderman and Trenderman(and other slender brothers need to fake announce a war against Zalgo and instead of on the desolate land, they'll be having the war far away from Zalgo's own lair so they go in the deep ocean.

Splendorman's job during the war is to kill Offenderman in Zalgo's lair himself. The main character have to remain unknown to Zalgo at all times so whenever the case if Zalgo blame on Splendorman, the main character will defend and take the blame. Which will fight with Zalgo in his own lair.

In the end... Main character defeat but not killed. Zalgo acknowledge main character's power and decided to spare them, because he's just having a good mood. A good mood because so many unexpected events happening during this time, it brought Zalgo in amusement.(This is just another simple cliche plot armor👩🏻🧍‍♀️)

I literally came up with this type of story bcs I'm so mad with the existence of Offenderman like who tf came up with an abomination yet manage to do that nicely into the creepypasta because he's quite literally a criminal but like,,, What tf happened to his characteer and why do I see many people love him?????? Because he's a villian similar like Dottore(from Genshin impact)??

Nah I'm gonna search about him more to understand what tf is going on by myself later, It's been long since I've visited the fandom afterall...

I hope y'all like this brother vs brother relationship in the slender family concept. This is just my idea bcs I actually have no energy to write an actual story about the creepypasta but hopefully, this one gain attention and interest to some people...