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Hiten: so what do you want to have for dinner?

Koume: I'm not hungry

Hiten: come on kiddo I know you haven't eaten since I picked you up

Koume: I wanna go home

Hiten: okay we can go home.

Koume: quit acting like my daddy

Hiten: the know it hurts what's going on but.

Koume: take me home.

*Timeskip*

Me: hey kiddo what's wrong?

Koume: I want nothing to do with him! *Door alarm*

Me: Koume wait!

Hiten: I tried

Me: I know, she needs more time, it's the hardest for her.

Hiten: I just want to be a good dad for her.

Me: I know you're trying, but I know the connection between a father and a daughter......she loves naraku.

Hiten: there's nothing I can do is there

Me: hey, come here. I know it's hard she's putting up a wall that you want to break through I know your not trying to replace him but in her eyes

Hiten: I'm a step father.

Me: I think I have an idea but you need to trust me

Hiten: what?

Me: I'm bringing naraku in, knowing him he's going to fight through us to apologize to Koume, what you need to do is pick at every word he says. If he says "I should never have treated her like that." You need to pull out what he did do neglect, abuse of all kinds.

Hiten: I got the plan now...., Really think it'll work.

Me: worth a shot

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