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Guys please vote and comment day by day votes are decreasing and I don't know how .
If anything I am lacking in please say me , if you are not liking my way of writing or feeling bored by chappies please say me so that I can change what is not good .
Without saying anything if you people stop voting while reading how do I take it normally .
For every chappter I am giving 6k+ words yet am not getting the expected votes and appreciation .
If this continue like this then how do I proceed further in writing a story .

Am really not understanding what I am lacking in when compare to other author stories  . All stories are gaining good respsonse except mine , thats the reason am asking say me what I am lacking in so that I can change it and give good chappies .

One important matter I want to say is after todays update the other update will be after 15th july as I am busy with exams .
I hope who ever are bearing me and my story will be ok with my inactiveness till then .
Sorry for that but I am helpless in either ways .

Please do vote and comment readers , I don't even want a follow from you nor I am keeping any target of votes like other authors just begging you to vote if you really felt my story worth the vote .
Just think for once just 12 votes for 7k words .... what should I feel after seeing this .

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Time started to skip by showing night 10:00pm .
After dinner ,
Party is still on , present everyone are dancing like a crazy people after making  garden like a pub theme .
A slow music is playing around giving chills to the stars who are high after having back to back drinks .

Maximum members are swaying their body being high singing songs along dancing with random heroines .
Anurag is standing boringly paying no attention to the music , dance and pleasing of his friends who were requesting him for join them ,
But he is not in a mood to join them as he don't want to leave any glimpse of his Jaan who is sitting little from him with his parents and friends smiling and laughing .
He wanted to join them but couldn't as his friends are not leaving him , hand overing a glass of wine to him his one friend went to dance asking him to join , saying " in few minutes I will be there "
Anurag kept the glass of vine near his lips to take a sip forgetting he is trying to quit the drink and smoking .

He had quitted smoking without trying much as he is not much into it but drink is something which he takes 5times in a week being in party or meeting with friends or for shooting .
Sensing a strong gaze on him he averted his eyes to look at Preeti who is little upset seeing him drinking , he knew she doesn't like at all but still she is not saying anything to him .
He remember her saying
" I knew you have drinking habit and it is not bad cause you are in limit but still please do not  take more and be little concious while taking it "

She didn't directly said him to quit nor indirectly asked him to but he understood she doesn't want him to drink more .
He thought to play with her for sometime .
Her expressions totally changed from smile to sad yet she gave a small smile to  him seeing his eyes on her .
Reading her eyes he understood she is tired and sleepy , he already asked her to go and sleep even Neha did but Preeti didn't listened as everyone are present and are enjoying .
When both of them are having a eye conversation Anurag heard someone from his friends saying
" heyy , what a beauty . Neha sister is really gorgeous and sexy man " ,
" Do you think she is single ! or the boy sitting next to her is her boyfriend ? "

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