O.C. Review and Advice

Jack (Gus-the-anomaly)

Warning: a lil cringe 

Fandom: none 

Full name: Jack (he doesn't know his full name)

It is not explained why he doesn't know his full name. Other than that, pretty average so far.

Name reason: I really like normal names for crazy characters 

Sex: male

Pronouns: he\him

Sexuality: aroace

Don't see that too often.

Age: 11

Species: human

Skin color: pale as heck

Eye shape: a bit demented, he tore his eyes out due to hallucinations 

Jack, no eyes, I'm not a member of the Creepypasta fandom but I am seeing something here.

Eye color: when he had his eyes they were green

Body shape: I draw him with rectangle

Average kid body shape nice.

Scars: mostly burn scars on arms/legs but he tore out his eyes and now wears bandages around where the used to be

Common accessory: blue/grey bandana

Common clothing: grey shirt, blue baggy pants tucked into his boots.

Personally: has a calm disposition, and acts a bit mature for his age, acts like he can't feel emotions, can be a bit unhinged.

So he's like those kids in school that pretend to be edgy except he can be legitimately unhinged?

Strengths: effective communicator (can express his ideas easily), nimble, knowledgeable 

Weakness: cannot defend himself, blind, low durability 

Traits: low self control (what led him to tear his eyes out) 

Mother: (died by plague)

Father: (died by plague)

Siblings: none

Friends: still working on this

Thank you @Gus-the-anomaly

[Reviewing]

6/10

He doesn't contradict himself, and most of the information needed is given. One of the few reasons it's so low is because you didn't give a backstory. There is also the fact that he has no eyes and is named Jack. You also didn't say what the plague was, but he has burn scars so a fire happened?

[Diagnosis]

Just change his name and give us more information.