O.C. Review and Advice

Authors Note + New Rules + New Form

Hello! Hello! Sorry for being gone around... a year? I lost motivation, then forgot my account password. Within this year I've changed and (hopefully) matured a fair amount. I hope to get back into reviewing characters, although with a change. Rather than this being a 'Original Character Hospital', I'll simply call it what it is; giving advice to improve characters in whatever they're used for. I've changed the rules to be less repetitive. I've also changed the form to give out more info. Anyway, here's the rules list and some general disclaimers.

General Disclaimers

I am just one person still in school, so please do not be upset if your character review doesn't get uploaded in a few days. 

As you've probably guessed, 'Gus' is not going to be joining me in this. While yes they may be part of peer reviews, they won't always be.

I will make Author's notes for any major changes. One of these might be someone new being on the team.

I am keeping the year old reviews up. This is due to the fact that those Original Characters are still their  Original Characters, and I will only take them down if explicitly wanted by each person.

The main review is going to be at the bottom of the character form. I usually won't add much comments on the review while it's still going through, unless I have something actually useful on my mind.

If you'd like you can change the form, it is only 

Rules

1) It would be greatly appreciated if you put trigger warnings down. There are many topics people are uncomfortable with; and it's not much better if someone gets jump scared with these topics.

2) While yes, advice is appreciated, please do not harass anyone featured in this. This includes making fun of someone's character and threatening a person.

3) Please do not put in really bad characters if you don't want critique of them. With this rule I ask you not to put in characters already in media.

Form

Required if applied to

Trigger Warnings:

Parental Figures:

Siblings:

Lovers:

Required Regardless

Fandom:

Full Name:

Age:

Gender:

Species:

Romantic Preference:

Sexual Preference:

Physical Appearance:

Backstory:

Personality:

Extra:

Clothing:

Accessories:

Talents:

Magical Abilities:

Please let me know if I missed anything.

I won't be able to cover everything as this is reviewing characters from multiple fandoms, or their own original world.