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Hunting Herobrine[2013 WATTY AWARDS]
FanficGreg(a.k.a KingG45) and Alex(a.k.a GrandpaAwesome) were pulled into minecraft be Herobrine. They have to slay Herobrine himself, as well as survive to escape. Along the way, Greg makes a ton of new friends(human or not) as they try to kill Herobrine.
Part 1: The adventure
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