Esoterico: A Hidden Land

AUTHOR'S NOTE

Well, I'm here just for a few words.
My story "Esoterico: A Hidden Land " has made its way to completion. The seventeen chapter named 'Epilogue' concludes the book.
Well, this book was a salad of my ludicrous fantasy ideas which i put together to make THIS. From last year, I made those stuff like the seven sorcerers, Magicademia, the hidden land thing etc. But I never thought these would turn into my first work I'll publish somewhere.
Wattpad was my device to see what people say reading my story. At least my success is, i got some people's views of this book which shall help a lot for me to improve my writing.
I believe my story is mediocre and boring, especially i have regrets for my pacing— the chapters must have been shorter. Like this I found a lot of problems i hope to fix later on. Still honestly speaking, this is the best i could do now. My former unpublished stories are worse unless i edit them drastically to improve them root to tip.
Guys I had a plan about a trilogy. But I reckon it won't work. Character depth, as I understand now, is the most important for credible stories. In my story it is completely missing and there's no way I can fix it in later books. Besides, I've lost interest in this because I believe, after enough practice and improvement, I can deliver stories A LOT BETTER THAN THIS. And yeah, i keep this Esoterico world for later; it may return with a different name, different characters, different possibilities. And I hope when it does, it will be a lot lot better. With this hope I leave. With demonic pressures of studies, I have no idea when I'm returning to writing. Goodbye folks, wish me luck so I can return soon and of course, with better stories.

Lastly, this is the comment box for you guys. Say whatever you want about my story. Don’t hesitate; you won't offend me by criticism, instead it will help me a lot in my future of writing. So, every comment— no matter who delivers it or what s/he says— will be sincerely taken.
So I hope you liked this story if You're reading this author's note after finishing the book. Whoever is reading this book is getting my utmost gratitude. I delivered this author's note at the end because as a reader, i know a long author's note at the beginning is SO boring...
So, stay well everyone. Enjoy whatever you get to enjoy in this world turned badlands.

Update: I hereby announce this story as an abandoned trash bag. I have some concepts for a reboot which may have some loose elements from this one but that's bound to be very VEEEEEERY different. This story, to me right now, was a lot experimental than I thought and now the potential REBOOT OF THIS STORY has the potential to turn into a bigger, better and sprawling saga which will have nothing to do with this. Yet, I'm confirming nothing right now because I currently have only a few vague and loose strands yet to be woven into something really good in some far future. I can only  hope. [Asiannoz, 26 Oct 2024]