The Stare
By gurlchilOk I've gave it a read, and I wanna start by saying I don't read romance, Infact this is my first one.
The Review:
Your writing style is on point, skillfully painting vivid pictures with detailed descriptions. To better the narrative you could consider incorporating more cultural themes, it would have insights into the main character's persona by exploring her parents background.The intimate portrayal of the coffee spill show you understand your genre, and the interactions between the 2 really shows that. The story appears to draw inspiration from "50 Shades" you should infuse it with originality as you progress. Stay true to your captivating writing style and find new perspectives and create a unique story, try to reach you readers on a more personal, intimate level.
Overall I think you've got some good story telling and a skill with seductive words.
My rating is 5/10
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