Tortured Hearts (captainswan) fanfiction

Chapter 6. 3rd person POV.

First a big mob of the dwarves and Charmings came running in, but everyone stopped short when they saw the scene infringed of them. A once cold hearted pirate with tears gleaming on his face holding the only thing he holds dear. It stayed like that, for what felt like a century in the dark filled room, almost silent except for hearing a few sobs from Killian, who had his eyes shut and Emma held close to him in his arms. Then suddenly all chaos broke loose as the paramedics flowed into the room surrounding  Emma and Killian. The room was filled with so many voices, with orders being shouted, as a gurney was brought through the door. Snow and Charming were still frozen in place, from seeing their strong, beautiful daughter so weak and life-less, with blood everywhere. Killian had to be held back from Emma as they carried her on the gurney and into the waiting ambulance. "Swan! Swan!" Killian would shout, but fell silent after a huge wave of shock knocked him back to the ground. He couldn't bare to loose sight of his dearly beloved princess.

    Snow and David came out of their daze and ran out the door with the dwarves on their heels. But Killian ran out the door to where the paramedics left through and came into view of the streets crowed with people, whispering, yelling, crying, and talking. Some had distress all over their faces and others were worried, for their savior was just about to be gone forever  and all they are thinking of is, who will protect us now? This was making Killian's emotions go hey wire with all the murmuring and how selfish these people were being! But just before he could make them all sorry David's truck pulled up, and he yelled, "Get in!"That was enough for Killian to leave "the sorry rats of people," he thought, for they were going to see Emma.

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Killian, Snow, David, Red, and the dwarves were all jammed into the waiting room of the hospital. Just leaning on a pillar and staring at the floor. Killian's eyes were empty of almost any emotion. Snow and Charming were sitting together on the chairs provided, trying to comfort each other, with Red, right beside them. There was no one walking by, because they were all with Emma.

The hospital had gained a very heavy silence, no one daring to break it.

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Suddenly one of the double doors slammed open with a mob of doctors yelling orders/procedures and running to the O.R. Just like that everything became silent, as Killian  slid down the wall to sit on the floor, feeling heartbroken. He hated feeling hopeless, because he can't even lift a finger to help his Swan get better.       

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