Title of the story: Innocent to Gangster
Is title se clearly pata chalta hai k storyline kia hai?? Mene saaf saaf btaya tha k jab maa baap ki strictness hadd se barrh jati hai to bachy bhatk jaty hain. R yhi meri story line hai jo k change nhi ho skti na me change kru gi kisi b soorat pe. Story line change mtlb sub change. Me story line kese change krdu jabb is story ma mtlb hi change ho jaye aik simple c story bann kr reh jaye gi agar me story change kru gi.
But logo k dms a rhy hain k ks k characters ko change kro change kro. Jo k nhi ho skta hai. Aap sub k comments dekhne k baad me ne aik faisa kia hai.
Agar aap logo chahty ho k me ks ka character ko asaa naa rakhu jesa me dikha rhi hu to mjhy naa chahty huye b is story ko abhi yahani isi wqat discontinue krna hoga. Me story line nhi change kr skti. Han but story zroor discontine kr skti hu.
Ab aap log decide krlo k kia krna hai.
Honestly speaking to mera comments parh k ab is story ko likhne ka b mann nhi ho rha hai. Mtlb k what is this yaar... Me itne twist and turns lana chah rhi hu is story main. Me itni excited thi wo sub aap logo ko deliver krne k lea mgr aaj k comments parh k sara mood off kr dea.
Mene bola thaa aap logo ko k ks ka character adjust krna pry ga magar shahyd nhi.. aap log adjust nhi kro gy.
To me hi is story ko yhi abhi is wqt khatm krti hu... Mera bilkul b mann nhi ho rha hai comments parh kr kuch b likhne ko.
Sorry....
Mera to koi b story ka mann nhi hai...
Aap logo ko yh to dekhna chahye k yeh kon sa real main ho rha hai. Story hai story smjh kr parho.
Itne twist r turns le k ane thu mjhy ..😕😕😕 sara mood spoil ho gaya mera..
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Innocent to Gangster
FanfictionKai baar maa baap ya bry behan bhai ki hadd se zyada strictness aap k bacho ko ap se door kar deti hai r wo bhi hamesha k lia. Peeped in and read this emotional story.
