The phantom menace: Chapter 1

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A/N: The movie will be the same up until the ship arrives at Tatooine. this story will be told in the third person of Revan only.

Shortly after a silver ship emerged from hyperspace, a bearded man with long (Brown with specks of white) hair walked into a storefront that sold spare parts. "I need parts for a J-type 327 Nubian," the bearded man said to Watto. The Toydarian came over and began to speak in Basic. "Ah, yes! Nubian. We have lots of that." Watto then turned to Revan and his twin Anakin, speaking in Huttese. "Boys, get in here now!" Anakin ran into the room with Revan close behind him. Watto turned to them "What took the two of you so long?" them asked in Huttese "We were cleaning pieces in the back." Revan said to ease Watto's anger. The bearded man said, "My droid has a readout of what I need."

"Watch the store. I've got some selling to do." Watto then switches to Basic "So, let me take thee out back, huh? Ni you'll find what you need." He flew off chuckling. As he walked out, the bearded man grabbed a piece of debris and (who says it?) says, "don't touch anything". Anakin was sitting on the countertop and asked, "Are you an angel?" the girl who was a little older than Revan. "What?" she asked. "Anakin, she is not an angel that the deep space pilots talk about. The moons of Lego are not angels but apparitions in space." Revan told the duo as he walked away. After the bearded man walked in from his talk with Watto as he looked upset. The next few minutes went by quickly as the two boys were told to leave by Watto, the two boys quickly caught up to the bearded man and his group as the one weird extended face grabbed Sebublba's food. This caused the Dug to pounce on the alien. This was when Revan and Anakin walked over, Revan had a smirk on his face "Careful, Sebublba. He's a big-time outlander. I'd hate to see you diced before you raced Anakin again." Revan said in Huttese this gave Anakin a reason to smile. This caused the Dug to get into Revan's face and says "Next time the two of us race, boy, it will be the end of you. If you two weren't slaves, I'd squash you now." After saying this Sebublba walked away from the outlander. Anakin finished the conversation saying "Yeah, it'd be a pity if you had to pay for us. Hi." Anakin greeted the bearded man as he walked over to the trio.

"Hi there." the bearded man returned. After checking that the Dug had walked away Revan came back to the group. "Your buddy here was about to be turned into orange goo." Revan said as Anakin to move to finish what was being said by his brother. "He picked a fight with a Dug, an especially dangerous Dug called Sebublba." The outlander spoke in his garbled wording. "Mesa haten crunchen. Das da las ting mesa want." to which the bearded man looked at the outlander, "Nevertheless, the boy is right. You were headed into trouble. Thanks, my young friends." The bearded man said. The group walked for a little while when they came up to a food stall. "Here, you'll like these pallies, here." Anakin said handing the food to the bearded man who replied with a simple "thank you." Revan was looking out to the sand dunes as the owner says "Storm's coming up Ani. You and your brother better get home quick." Revan turned back to the group "Do you have shelter?" he asked the bearded man who looked at Anakin. "We'll head back to our ship." "Where is your ship?" Revan asked, "It's on the outskirts." the bearded man responded. "You'll never reach the outskirts in time. Sandstorms are very dangerous. Come on, Revan and I will take you to our place." Anakin said as the group began to walk towards the Skywalker house. "Mom! Mom, we're home." Anakin yelled as the group walked in the door. The outlander said "Ah, dissen cozy." "These are my friends." Anakin said. "I'm Qui-Gon Jinn." the bearded man said. "I'm building a droid. You wanna see?" Anakin said to a girl that he had been talking to at Watto's shop. "Your sons were kind enough to offer us shelter." Qui-Gon told Shmi. "Come on, I'll show you 3PO." Anakin said as he dragged the young woman to his room. Revan and Qui-Gon walked out to talk. As the two talked Revan started having flashes of two men fighting side by side against soldiers that had helmets and armor that was extremely resistant to lightsabers, then another flash happened, and he was standing on a ship looking at a floating fortress which seemed to have several large engines that could help it move and there was another flash which show him in a suspended prison being tortured by an ancient Sith. The young boy then clutched his head in pain as more memories and painful experiences flashed through his mind. This caused the Jedi warrior to pause and hold the boy still as he slowly regained his bearings. "What happened?" Qui-Gon asks but Revan simply looks over to the Jedi and goes "I need to speak with the Jedi council." This shocked the man completely as he quickly pulled out the holo communicator that he was supposed to use to contact only the council.

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