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Dear readers,

I hope you're all doing well. I want to address some feedback I received yesterday regarding my writing. A reader reached out to me personally and expressed her dislike for a particular chapter in my story. She mentioned that they found it disturbing due to the presence of a rape scene and I show rape more in the story. I want to apologize if this content made anyone uncomfortable; it was not my intention to upset or offend anyone.

Additionally, the reader mentioned concerns about grammatical errors and the overall coherence of my story. As a non-professional writer, I understand that there may be room for improvement in these areas. I appreciate the feedback and will strive to enhance my writing skills to deliver a better reading experience for all of you.
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Jimin laughs again, this time cruelly. He enjoys knowing that Hana is terrified, and her pleas for help do nothing to sway him. His expression grows even more malicious as he turns his back to her and leaves the room, locking the door behind him.

Hana's heart sinks as the door clicks shut, leaving her alone in the dark room. She can feel the walls closing in on her, the fear suffocating her as she realizes that she is truly alone. In a desperate attempt to escape, she stumbles to her feet and rushes to the door, hoping to find a way out. She slams her fists against the solid oak door, but it does nothing to silence her muffled screams for help.

As she falls to the ground in a heap, Hana can't help but wonder how long she will be trapped in this nightmare. The cold, indifferent walls of her cell stare back at her, reminding her of the bleak days ahead. But she's not going to give up without a fight. She's determined to find a way out, to save herself, no matter how long it takes.

On The Other Side....

Taehyung suddenly burst into the room, calling out to his older brother, Jin. He urgently exclaimed, "Hyung! Hyung!" Jin, startled by the commotion, asked, "What's going on, Taehyung? Why are you shouting?"

Taehyung's face was filled with panic as he replied, "Hyung, Hana has been kidnapped!" Jin's eyes widened in shock and disbelief. "What? How did it happen?" he asked.

Taehyung took a deep breath and explained, "I was talking to Hana on the phone when suddenly someone knocked her out. As she went to check what was going on, there was a moment of silence. Then, I heard Jimin's she said. I called out to Hana, asking what happened, but there was no response."

Jin's expression turned grave as he realized the seriousness of the situation. "We need to act quickly," he said. "Let's go to police station now."

As Taehyung nodded as jin takes his car key and they both left the house and sit in the car. As they drove, Taehyung's mind was racing with possibilities of what could have happened to Hana. Jin noticed the worry etched on his brother face and placed a reassuring hand on his shoulder.

"Don't worry, Taehyung," Jin said reassuringly, placing a hand on Taehyung's shoulder. "We'll get to the bottom of this."

Taehyung nodded, grateful for Jin's support, but his phone suddenly buzzed. It was Miliy, and as he picked up the call, he greeted her with a hello.

Miliy's voice sounded worried as she spoke, "Hello, Taehyung. Is Hana with you? She's not picking up my phone."

Taehyung's heart sank as he heard Miliy's concern. He took a deep breath and replied, "Miliy, Hana got kidnapped."

There was a shocked silence on the other end of the line, before Miliy finally managed to say, "Kidnapped? But who would do such a thing?"

With a heavy sigh, Taehyung explained, "It was Jimin, our math teacher. I know it sounds unbelievable, but it's true."

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