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✨The Healing Bond--Reviews✨

Story Title: The Healing Bond

Author of the book: miiruex_

Reviewer of the book: sweetandhotcreator

Thank you for giving me the chance to review your book as I'm a huge fan of the romance genre. I enjoyed reviewing your story and I hope you find my reviews helpful.

Book Cover:4/5

Your book cover is clear and it really suits the story. I love the font used for the cover title as well.

Book Title: 4/5

The title is well thought out and shows that the story is full of depth. I haven't seen the relevance of the title (probably because you are still updating the beginning chapters) but it seems promising.

Blurb:3/5

The blurb is beautifully written but it seems like a summary of the entire story. Hence, it will most likely not draw in readers as it lacks a hook. Besides, you've also indicated that the main characters resolved their conflict hence, readers will have no reason to open the book. You can definitely make it better by including their conflict or hook or anything that will captivate readers. Please note that this is just a suggestion; you are free to aid my advice or not.

Grammar/Readability: 14/15

Excellent job of creating beautiful paragraphs with the right words and correct use of punctuation. Your spelling is nearly flawless so reading is fluent, easy, and understandable. I noticed that a few sentences contain a lot of the conjunction, "and" so you may want to minimize them.

Prologue: 2/5

Honestly, I wasn't impressed by your prologue as it didn't serve its purpose. A prologue sets the tone for the story, it determines if the book is promising or not. A prologue doesn't need a lot of info dumping. Your prologue is more like a summary of the book so readers may not be interested. I recommend you turn it into something more captivating or exclude the prologue. Not all stories require prologues. Again, you're not obligated to aid my suggestion.

Opening Chapter: 4/5

I love your first chapter cause the MC, Radhika has been introduced as a strong-willed, determined, bold, and smart woman. The ending of Chapter 1 shows that there's more to unfold in Radhika's life.

Character Development:12/15

Rhadika seems like a flawless character with no internal struggles so I look forward to seeing how her character will develop further. Will she achieve her dreams, will some obstacles distract her from reaching her goals or will she achieve everything without sweating? But her character will be relatable if she faces obstacles. Aditya on the other hand has both internal and external struggles, he's facing a lot of obstacles and I'm very intrigued to see how he overcomes his problems.

Plot Development: 11/15

I don't have much to say here as your current chapters (CH1-CH5) haven't dived deep into the main plot. Is it too slow or fast? The plot is slow but that is not a problem as some stories need to develop at a slow pace but try not to make it too slow. Is it engaging? Adithya's story seems to be more engaging than Radhika's.

Organization: 9/10

The timeline is clear and not confusing. The scenes have been properly organized.

Overall Enjoyment: 18/20

It was a good read. Will I continue reading? Yes, I will as I'm still intrigued to see what happens when Radhika and Aditya meet. I love how you've portrayed the Hindi culture in your story as it makes it more realistic. My major issues are with the blurb and prologue. Apart from those, I enjoyed reading.

TOTAL: 81//100