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Title: Ricochet

Author: DeejayDJ010

Reviewer: SchtxzaLore

Hello, I'm glad that I got a chance to review your book. I hope you find my reviews helpful.

Cover 4/5

The white background and the black colors worked totally fine, the tiny little red design ( I'm guessing it's a brain) in the middle distracts me in a bad way. The font is readable and I love how the letters are somehow ricocheting-which gives its identity. Furthermore, I love the swirly thing on the cover, the placement is not distracting but rather it compliments the title and gives its foregrounding effect.

Title 5/5

Very alluring. It leaves an effect and it's easy to remember.

Blurb 4/5

The first sentence was an attention grabber. However, the whole blurb left me confused. I was trying to find how the whole blurb connects with the opening sentence. I believe this will be disclosed in the following chapters.

Well, setting that aside, the blurb is a good hook. Especially as it ends with a question that will make your reader wonder. The mystery is there, the hanging question sets the tone for your novel. Strangely, although I haven't read the book yet, I get the dystopian vibes from just the description.

Writing construction 13/15

The writing and adherence to grammar rules are appropriately addressed. I found it to be a smooth and accessible read, with easily digestible paragraphs. The visual format is aesthetically pleasing, and the choice of vocabulary harmonizes well with the story's intended tone and atmosphere.

The only thing that made me deduct some points was the organization of the chapter. When I first got into it, I thought I was reading the prologue but it feels like it's more of a chapter than the latter. So when I checked the list of chapters, I realized there was no prologue, (or maybe I could be wrong.)

But I suggest adding a prologue that will set the hook of the whole book.

Prologue 4/5 and 1st chapter ⅗ = 8 /10

( Since there is no prologue, I decided to combine the points)

Let's begin by discussing the chapter's title. Initially, it appears to convey a vibe similar to that of the blurb. The decision to enclose a pivotal word within parentheses ( ) makes a significant impression, establishing the mood for the opening chapter. It made me question what could have happened or what was about to occur. The chapter also effectively introduced the main character, providing insight into his thoughts and how he perceives his surroundings. In general, the first chapter skillfully avoided revealing crucial hints and was thoughtfully positioned. It was an interesting start, I must say.

Characters 12/15

Personally, I have a strong preference for Jamie's character. I find that I connect with him more than with Clara and the other characters. When I was first introduced to Clara, I had less interest as I found it challenging to relate to her character, unlike Jamie, who was very transparent and captivating. With each chapter I read, Jamie remained consistently intriguing, making his character more engaging to me. While the other characters did make an impression, Jamie and Clara stood out the most. I believe that these characters will continue to evolve as the story progresses. Nevertheless, I would recommend establishing distinct tones for each of them.

Plot 13/15

Based on the blurb, the book is set to be a roller coaster full of action and I feel the dystopian vibes from it. However, upon reading a few of the chapters, I realized that it was not fully packed with what I had been expecting. Rather it was smoothly written, building up into the right time of where the main focus of the plot will occur. Rather than the dystopian that I was expecting, in the crevices of the descriptions and narrations, the dialogues, and thoughts of the character I somehow feel a touch of satirical delivery although it was clear in every chapter that this book or the plot was nowhere satirical. I guess, the writing just felt light and easy to digest that's why.

I'd like to add that this plot is not entirely novel; many books have employed similar scenarios. However, what sets this one apart is the absence of haste and the lack of contrived dark elements aimed at creating an edgy story. Instead, it feels refreshing, straightforward, and easy to grasp and follow.

Organization 10/10

The settings, the timeframe, and the pacing are all perfectly integrated and easily comprehensible. There is no difficulty in processing these aspects, as they work together seamlessly.

Enjoyment 15/20

The first five to seven chapters were quite enjoyable, and I must say, the development of the storyline was engaging.

Overall: 84/100

I would like to express my gratitude for granting me the opportunity to read and analyze your book. Reviewing it was an enjoyable experience and a wonderful opportunity. It's important to note that my review doesn't necessarily encapsulate the entirety of your writing and your book. Instead, please consider it as one reader's feedback. Thank you once again, and I hope you continue to pursue your writing endeavors.

• Txza