Chapter 1: Here we go again...

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Note: If you're new here then please read my first story or else you won't understand a single thing you're about to read. As always, the actual creator of the comic called  "Eeveelution Squad '' is PkM-150 or EV-Zero.

Another note: I have no idea whether this will end up being part 4 of the storyline. Maybe Part 50, maybe Part 23, it depends if someone comments on their request while I'm doing another "If I was in..."

Fun note: There is, a WattPad version of the whole comic, just search it up.

Final note: Remember that this is just a concept, some lines and "scenes" will remain the same or end up entirely different. Subscribe to my main channel called "Obsidian Reborn" and a second channel called "Reborn Obsidian" if you're interested.

Powers: All

Characters in this Part:
Obsidian King (Jonah)
Ruby Knight (Joshua)
Vivian
Isis
DDLC characters from the last part (only mentioned)

The scene allows the viewers to see a wide shot of the "New Mineria Academy" as it slowly zooms into a specific location of the campus, that specific location was the home of the Obsidian King. The camera zooms through a closed window and we see the Obsidian King finally waking up.

Obsidian King: "*yawn*"

The Obsidian King looks at his phone for any missed calls or messages sent by The Creator...nothing yet. It's been *insert the exact number of months it took me to upload another animation on YouTube* since the Obsidian King got word from The Creator about taking on another mission. While I waited, I had been taking care of my duties. In my free time, I'd stream, spend time with my friends, or even have some fun with the Dokis. Ever since they got here, they've become well accustomed to this world, every day they've been living their best lives. (Offscreen)

The Obsidian King stops giving you some exposition and finally gets out of bed. He then heads to the kitchen where he is greeted by his brother.

Ruby Knight: "Sup."

Obsidian King: "Hey.", I said in a monotonous voice

Ruby Knight: "Anything?"

Obsidian King: "Nope."

Obsidian King: "Though I have a feeling today is the day."

Ding-dong

Both Obsidian and Ruby looked directly at the door at the same time. The Obsidian King opens their door to see that a package has arrived at their doorstep. He picked up the "light" cardboard box and shut the door on his way back in.

Obsidian King: "It's here!"

Ruby Knight: "What's here?"

Obsidian King: "Well, remember what happened last time?"

Ruby Knight: "Yeah?"

Obsidian King: "Well, me being like Iron Man, able to learn from their mistakes, have been working on something that will help us on our future adventures. This here is the final part needed to assemble a suit capable of blocking out the portal effects from disabling our powers."

Ruby Knight: "Oh."

The Ruby Knight looks deep inside the box with his detection ability.

Ruby Knight: "Hey look, there's something else in the box."

Obsidian King: "Huh?"

The Obsidian King sees for himself that there is indeed something else.

Obsidian King: "Gotta go take this to the lab."

*summons a portal that teleports us both to the lab*

The lab looked a lot more improved than it was last time, EVERY single portal was organized in columns. (don't ask how)

Obsidian King: "It's a transmission sent by The Creator himself!"

The Obsidian King presses the play button.

Click

The device turned on and played the message.

The Creator: "Hey uh, I know I'm supposed to be there to guide you but I'm kinda on vacation right now. Uh,  let me know if the part I delivered to you worked so there aren't any problems while I'm gone. I mean, who knows? Wherever you're about to get yourself into may be worth the trouble if it doesn't. Of course, you have my full permission to enter another portal. This is The Creator signing off, peace."

Click

At the end of the transmission, a blue trail on the floor led the brothers to the next portal. The Obsidian King prepared to gear up with the new suit he created. The Obsidian King also brought along a bag holding various amounts of things just in case.

Obsidian King: "Welp, here I go."

Ruby Knight: "Have fun in there."

The Ruby Knight starts to back away from his brother.

Obsidian King: "*deep breath* Hope this works."

The Obsidian King jumped in right after Isis and Vivian arrived on the scene.

Vivian and Isis: "Where is he?"

The Ruby Knight points towards the portal that his brother has just gone through.

Isis: "Oh."

Vivian: "Dang it, I was late again." (Maybe the next "work" I make will change that for you 🤔)

The scene goes to the Obsidian King's perspective.

Of course, the portal spawned him way up in the sky. However, the environment looked very...how do I put it?...cartoony, yeah that's the word. The Obsidian King's suit was working very well at the beginning, he was able to fly/hover down with no difficulty.

Obsidian King: "Suit is stable."

He spoke too soon...

Upon being 10 feet above the ground, the suit started to malfunction.

Obsidian: "Oh here we go again!"

End of Chapter 1.

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