Vivaan's house is shown inside it vivaan body was laying beneath his smiley photo.
Karuna ji was sitting away from his body with no emotion in her eyes she was just staring at his body she was sitting very far away she was not even seeing his face .Khushi was crying badly hugging devki ji who was almost wailing.
Whole bhartnagar was present their .Some ladies were trying to calm devki ji by hugging her and some were with karuna ji and all children were near khushi calming her down even though all were crying badly.
Dadaji was sitting in a devastated condition.
No one ever thought that They would ever see vivaan like this one day out of a sudden gone forever.
No one was trying to console anyone because no words were enough to console anyone so all just sat their crying hugging each other .
No words could ever give them their vivaan back .
But all were tensed for karuna ji who was neither speaking nor crying.
She should be the one wailing na then why she was sooo silent.
Dadaji teary eyes fell on her he slowly went towards her and put a hand on her shoulder with a lump in his throat:- Bahu hm...ara.... viva...an chala ga...ya hai hame c....hh..od..kar.A tear escape her eyes .
But she slowly stood up and went towards her room while khushi was shouting:- vivaannnn vivaannn while crying bitterly she was not in a sense to realise how her family is her only concern was vivaan who was laying infront of her .
Karuna ji stopped and said without turning :- papa ji ek babat apne sahi kahi thi ek maa papa ke liye sabse bada dukh uske Jawan bete ki arthi ko Agni Dena hota hai acha hua iske pita nahi rahe warna Aaj woh ye bardash nahi kar pate with that she left towards her room .
While debu who was sitting in the room heard all this but he didn't flinched because he was just hearing not feeling anything.
But karuna ji's words felt like accusation directed towards him .
He know it was for him but he couldn't help but think if only if only he was with vivaan maybe he would have saved him.Outsider will thing that vivaan was almost 14 mature enough to take care of himself then why he need debu .
But only debu knew vivaan was mature at the same time careless.
He was independent at the same time dependent .
It was not vivaan it was debu who loves to protect vivaan .
It was debu who used to take care of vivaan like a baby .That's why it was hard for debu to forgive himself.
He maybe 14 but for debu he was a immature child who was childish cute and impulsive but just infront of his bhaiya his debu bhaiya.Debu eyes tear up remembering a scene
" Kya kar raha hai vivaan lag jayegi tujhe "
"Are bhaiya don't worry aap ho na aap mujhe kabhi lagne nahi doge".
"Acha aur kabhi nahi lagne se bacha paya toh?"
" Aisa kabhi nahi hoga bhaiya because aap hamesha hoge mujhe bachane ke liye"."Aaj sach main nahi bacha paya main tujhe vivaan"debu thought.
Soon he heard a knock on his door and heard kamini Ji's voice :- debu beta....uhm...beta tumhare dadaji aur baki admi log vivaan ki....bo...dy... Ko smashan le jaa rahe hai.
She said with closed eyes and hesitation .Debu didn't said anything just sat their looking at the sky from the window.
It was like he was trying to get a glimpse of vivaan in the sky .Hopping to see vivaan smiling but it never happened.
Kamini ji left after seeing him not responding.
She can understand his feelings while bharatnagar has seen what debu was for vivaan.Vivaan was very expressive of his feeling he would often say 'i love you bhaiya'.
But debu never said anything back just used to smile .
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Fanfictionjust an short story on devansh with little different concept.