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I would like some advice for this assignment I'm doing

this is what I have: 

                                       Nightly Stalkers

          The moon rises and shadows creep through the forest. Street lights died down until the darkness was at my feet.

          The shadows crept closer. Their covert steps blended into the supposed silence of the night.

          The hushed sound of creaking footsteps got louder every passing second. Then a silent breath whispered,

          "Surprise... I found you..."

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