Is this right?

X-factor Part 2

Hello! What's your name? The judges asked me. Hello, I am Harry.. Styles, and I work in a bakery.
I answerd being really nervous, i have never stood infront of a packed audience, there were atleast over 200 people! But i think i smashed it!
The judges asked me many random questions, especially that one guy me sister doesn't like.
I sang 'Hey soul sister', but the judges didn't like it that much, so they asked me to sing something else, I wasnt really prepared but I took it as a pro, I sang 'isn't she lovely' by Steven Wonder. One of my personal faves ever since I was little, he has always been one of my biggest idols.
While i was on stage me Mum, sister, and me stepdad Robin stood backstage and cheerd me on. Especially my mum has been with me all the way. When I was done, the judges talked quite a bit, they were mostly impressed, but one of them said i didnt have enough confidence nor expirence yet, so young i am.
But 2 yesses, and 1 no. I can live with that.
Days turned into weeks, and every audition went well, until they had to pick one out of atleast 15 of us boys.
We were all standing in a line and waited for the last name to be shouted.
While I stood there i thought about how wonderfull it had been, I've meet alot of sweet and talented people here, I didn't wanted it to be over. No matter what i'll always remember this moment.
The final contestance who has made it throuh is.. Tom Richards.
When the last name was shouted i was broken, it wasn't me. I cried really hard.
But I knew it wasn't over yet, i always wanted to be in a band, and the though of me alone, kinda scares me anyway. So i guess i will contine with my school band.