KhaliqahAzima 's book has a captivating opening that grabs the reader's attention and curiosity. It introduces a fascinating world of political powers and influence. I admire how the story explores various themes and emotions of human. I love how the author used metaphors and her creative poem writing in the story.
I would suggest using consistent tense and point of view in the dialogues.
I admire how well-written story it is, with clear and concise language and a smooth flow.
It has the potential to be a great fantasy or mythology story that can appeal to a wide audience.
So fellow readers and authors who love historical fiction do read this story! You will surely enjoy reading it!
Do give a review in the comment after reading this amazing story!