Hello everyone,
Sorry for late update. This CHAPTER started a new story of TEENS LOVE STORY because I decided twist the story. Since I post a suggestion list and I'd like you to vote for the ending but nobody vote...so...
I decided for 'suggestion B'.
Bonus characters(they are important characters in this BOOK):
Darwin Builder
Reginal Builder (Ragna Builder)
Dove Dexton (Dove Katrina Dexton)BGM for this CHAPTER:
A thousand years (piano version)
Pretty girlThis CHAPTER includes a song; this song also I will publish on Songs (Wattpad)
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(I)
BGM: PRETTY GIRLOne day, the Builder family were in the hospital because Ragna's father was in the surgery room.
More than five hours of their waiting for the doctor. They hoping that the surgery will be successful. Ragna was being afraid of her own father. She was twenty year old engineering student. The only person who sent her to university was her father. Ragna has a younger sister and a younger brother.
Her lover was Darwin Builder, Ragna's cousin and he's smart. But Darwin always interested of talking with Miltda and being closer together. They were cousins.
Miltda stared at Ragna, she had good new look. She was so pretty.
But Ragna stared at Darwin, not her. She got up and went to Ragna and her siblings. She talked to Ragna about her father's condition. Ragna told her everything. Tears came to Miltda's eyes. The Builder family became less and less. Miltda hoped that her family will alive because they were her family members and she grew up with them.
Suddenly, the doctor came out from surgery room. Ragna ran to the doctor and asked too many questions. The doctor said: 'We can't save him.'
'Is my father alive?' Ragna asked again.
The doctor shook his head in disappointment and went.
Ragna began to cry like a child lost it's mother. Not only Ragna, others also crying including Miltda and Darwin.
Miltda turned away from a crowd of family and vanished to nowhere.
Darwin stared at Miltda as she vanished, so he decided to turn away from them and followed the way where Miltda went.
Ragna still sobbing. She never cared Darwin at the first because her father was passed away. She sobbed uncontrollably.
(II)
Miltda sat on a rock bench at the hospital entrance. There's a big fountain. She wiped tears away from her eyes. Too much pain and sorrow, she thought.
Suddenly, she heard footsteps of a young man.
Darwin walked towards Miltda and sat on the rock bench. Tired of following with Miltda can gave him a little exercise after these boring hours of sitting on the chair outside of surgery room.
'You know...why I followed with you as we came here?' Darwin asked.
'I really need a big space for myself for a moment, please. Please, Darwin. I know that we all hurt too much.' Miltda answered.
'I need some space with you, I don't want you to be more alone.'
'Proof?'
'Eh!'
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