JUDGE: TheAlchemyTeam
1. Novalunosis by EmeraldSeagrave
Title of the book 4/5
Cover presentation 4.9/5
Blurb 4.2/10
The Opening Chapter 8/10
Grammar 7/10
Plot Twists 8/10
Vocabularies 7/10
Dialogues Deliveries 6.5/10
Character Narrations 6.5/10
Story Development 7/10
Overall 7/10
Total 70.1/100
We love your book cover. It's very catchy! But we would suggest you to play with fonts too. The white Italics and blue background, kind of hard to read at first. Maybe adjust the font size too. Also the book name is unique yet very hard for readers to grip on. Over all the story starts pretty amazing, but the set up pace is slow. We hope to find more chapters to read soon.
2. Poor In heaven/the lake club by MaryPnkl
Title of the book 2/5
Cover presentation 3.5/5
Blurb 3.5/10
The Opening Chapter 5/10
Grammar 6/10
Plot Twists 5/10
Vocabularies 8/10
Dialogues Deliveries 6/10
Character Narrations 6.5/10
Story Development 7/10
Overall 6.5/10
Total 59/100
The Cover was a good choice, but could have been better. The font execution could have been better. Try to adjust the Font size and colors. As this is a enemies to Lovers book, the covers should have been more interesting, keeping in mind the essence of time it is taking place. Romance readers are always seeking for a good book with good covers too. The blurb was written in a plane scale. We think that, possibly you could have use a little paraphrasing, that could have helped.
Other than that, the book is really awesome to read.
3. Stuck with the DEVIL by _missstorywriter_
Title of the book 4/5
Cover presentation 2/5
Blurb 3/10
The Opening Chapter 6/10
Grammar 6/10
Plot Twists 5/10
Vocabularies 6/10
Dialogues Deliveries 6/10
Character Narrations 6.5/10
Story Development 7/10
Overall 6.5/10
Total 58/100
The Cover presentation is poor. As this is a Romance genre, the readers are more attracted to a good cover. And since this one is a mafia cover, this has to be more unique and eye catchy. We have went to the covers section too, but the covers still need a little colors and editing. Somehow it is still looking plain.
The opening chapter however is quite interesting. But you need to work on grammar and enhancement of your writing skills. Over all the story is good.
4. Influence by lce2021
Title of the book 4/5
Cover presentation 3/5
Blurb 2/10
The Opening Chapter 7/10
Grammar 6/10
Plot Twists 7/10
Vocabularies 7/10
Dialogues Deliveries 7.5/10
Character Narrations 6/10
Story Development 7/10
Overall 7/10
Total 69.5/100
Even though the cover needs a little work and the blurb is plain, the story takes quite interesting twists and turns. It is not only a Love story, but with mystery and thriller. Yet, you need to work on grammar and character narrations. Don't make it too lengthy or too short. Over all the book is amazing!
5. Secret Crush new version by hx_writer
Title of the book 4/5
Cover presentation 4/5
Blurb 6/10
The Opening Chapter 7/10
Grammar 6/10
Plot Twists 7/10
Vocabularies 7/10
Dialogues Deliveries 8/10
Character Narrations 7/10
Story Development 8/10
Overall 7/10
Total 71/100
The color combination on the cover is just amazing. Just a small lil suggestions. You can use some prop to make it look more interesting, like feathers or something else of your choice. But the book is just oh my god!!!
Finally a perfect Romance book!!
AND THE WINNER IS:
Secret Crush new version by hx_writer
***CONGRATULATIONS***
OUR 1ST RUNNER UP IS:
Novalunosis by EmeraldSeagrave
AND OUR 2ND RUNNER UP IS:
Influence by lce2021
****CONGRATULATIONS TO BOTH THE RUNNER UPS****
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