THANK YOU Poppy_Rusert for being a valuable judge and helping us in this award!!!
REVIEWS:
1: NO ONE PLANS TO DIE AT 18 BY ONE_H_
Title of the book 3/5
Cover presentation 5/5
Blurb 9/10
The Opening Chapter 8/10
Grammar 7/10
Plot Twists 8.5/10
Vocabularies 7/10
Dialogues Deliveries 7/10
Character Narrations 7/10
Story Development 8/10
Overall 7.5/10
Total: 77/100
Judge's Review: First of all, the cover is amazing!! I love how it gives out the vibe of thriller. The blurb was top notch too! The plot is neatly set up, but what I couldn't understand is the timelines of character narrations. Apart from this, I think this story needs to be published as a gripping thriller book worldwide!
Also, just a little suggestion. As a reader, I want to start reading the book without any spoiler of achievement seen. You can put a thrilling dedication. The readers may want to read the book first before the advertisement of your achievements. You can keep the achievement and the review somewhere in the ending.
2. RATRI (THE REGRET SERIES 1) BY IAMMN1998
Title of the book 5/5
Cover presentation 5/5
Blurb 9.5/10
The Opening Chapter 8.5/10
Grammar 8/10
Plot Twists 9/10
Vocabularies 7/10
Dialogues Deliveries 7.5/10
Character Narrations 8/10
Story Development 8.5/10
Overall 9/10
Total: 85/100
Judge's Review: The story starts with a grip of thrilling narration and has the strong dialogues and plot twists. Although a little notice on the grammar is needed. Yet I love how the plot is neatly set up. The cover is awesome according to the plot, yet I think a little use of graphics could make it more beautiful.
Also, would suggest to write a dedication for this book.
3. FOREVER FOR YOU BY dwarkaratna
Title of the book 3/5
Cover presentation 2/5
Blurb 8/10
The Opening Chapter 6.5/10
Grammar 7/10
Plot Twists 7/10
Vocabularies 6.5/10
Dialogues Deliveries 7/10
Character Narrations 7.5/10
Story Development 8/10
Overall 7/10
Total: 69.5/80
Judge's Review: The first part of the story have lot of non-book activities, like promotions and achievements, This distracts the readers very much. I would suggest to write a dedication or author's note to start with and rest of the promotions and achievements should have been at the end of the book.
The cover needs some good graphic work. It's a lot in the face. Yet when the story starts, it's quite intriguing!
4. WINGS OF LIGHT BY NxnsxgnorsDxmon
Title of the book 5/5
Cover presentation 2/5Blurb 9.5/10
The Opening Chapter 9.5/10
Grammar 8/10
Plot Twists 9/10
Vocabularies 9.5/10
Dialogues Deliveries 8.5/10
Character Narrations 8/10
Story Development 9/10
Overall 9/10
Total: 87/80
THIS BOOK IS JUST WOW!
Judge's Review: I love how the opening cast and trailer has taken place. The trailer is chilling and the whole book is just damn jumps scare. I keep reading this book till 2 am to finish it before judging. Grammar, story plot, narrations are top notch. Although, the cover doesn't go with the story potential. I suggest to try use some more thriller graphics to hook the readers.
Over all this book is awesome.
AND NOW THE WINNER OF ENIGMA ELIXIR IS
WINGS OF LIGHT BY NxnsxgnorsDxmon
***CONGRATULATIONS***
1ST RUNNER UP IS
RATRI BY IAMMN1998
&
2ND RUNNER UP IS
NO ONE PLANS TO DIE AT 18 BY ONE_H_
***CONGRATULATIONS TO BOTH RUNNER UPS***
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