13 Line without a hook (Posted on tiktok)

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(Characters I've thought of while writing this:Mo Xuanyu)

"Life could've been decribed as a line, a line without an ending or purpose to be there.
All of the other lines Either cross others or Something amazing is on these.
But mine has no intention to be like others.
My line ended rapidly, on the day I was supposed to meet them, It suddenly stoped to be drawn."

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- posted on the 13.01.2024 -

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