When I woke up it was still dark, I looked at my alarm it said 3:30. My face was still wet from all the tears and I began to cry again. I sat up in bed and stared out the window, it was still storming outside and it was still raining. Suddenly I saw a face at the window. I thought it was my imagination but I rubbed my eyes and wiped my tears away but the face was even clearer. It was a boy, he looked around my age and he was quite cute. I stared at him for a while and then realised he had an urgent look on his face and he was begging me to let him in. Without thinking, I crept to the window, as not to wake my mum or my older brother, and let him in. He was completely soaked and he looked quite dirty. It suddenly dawned on me...I don't know who this boy is....I have never met him....He could be dangerous....
Before I could say anything he said,
"I should really explain myself...well..."
I wasn't really concentrating on what he was saying to me, I couldn't keep my eyes of him. He was gorgeous. He had a such a cute French accent, his hair was perfect, his eyes were adorable...I couldn't find a single fault. He was a million times cuter than Jack, my ex. This time I think I am really in love.
The boy managed to grab my attention again and began,
"My name is Loic, Loic Nottet and we should probably get comfy because we are gonna be here for a while"
I stopped him before he could sit down on my bed as he was soaking and said,
"Stay there for a minute, I will get you some dry clothes"
He nodded and I left the room. I sneaked into my older brother's room and got a large black top and black trousers then returned to Loic. I showed him to the bathroom and he changed in there and washed himself. When he came out he looked so hot. His hair was dripping wet and the water was running down his face. I made and held eye contact with him for at least 10 seconds and I felt my heart skip a beat. Is this what real love feels like?
I led him back into my bedroom and we both sat beside each other on the end of my bed. Loic began,
" I guess the time has come for me to explain myself..."
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FanfictionOne night Elina wakes up in the middle of the night to see a boy at the window. She decides to let him in...but when she falls in love with him she suddenly realises she knows nothing about him.