"Vivaan ki madad"

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So main apni ye kahani baalveer returns season 2 ke baad se shuru kar rahi hu. Meri kahani wahan se shuru hogi,jahan Kaal Happy ke alawa apne sabhi hamshaklo ko maar chuka hai. Ray and bhaymaar ne bhi Kaal se haath mila liya hai, aur vivaan bhi Bharat nagar wapas aa gaya hai. Ab aage.........

[Note:- ek aur baat,jo maine nahi batayi,wo ye ki Rakshika aur Avi ki age vivaan ki paltan ke similar hai]

Golden Shaurya ek bahut hi dark place mein khade hue the. Koi aur bhi unke alawa mojud tha/thi, but darkness ki wajah se sirf uski aawaz sunai de rahi thi.

Sm1 :- (in disappointed tune) ye sab kya hai Shaurya? Aap mujhse itni badi baat kaise chupa sakte hai? Kya is brahmand ki rakshak hone ke naate mera itna bhi haq nahi hai ki yaha hone wali ghatnaon ke baare mein mujhe pata chale?

GS:- kshama kijiyega rajkumari Rakshika. Hume pata hai Kaal ke baare mein aapko na batane ki wajah se aap kuch nirash hai. Parantu Kaal ke baare mein bata kar hum aap ko pareshan nahi karna chahte the.

Rakshika:- parantu Shaurya! Aapke kuch na batane se pareshani to aur badh hi gayi na! Kaal ke paas baalveer ki aadhi powers aa chuki hai. Ab wo aur bhi powerful ho gaya hai. Agar use na roka gaya to...........

GS:- aap chinta mat kijiye,aisa kuch nahi hoga! Hume pura yakeen hai chote baalveer per. Wo bilkul baalveer ki hi parchai hai. Wo aur pariya mil kar Kaal ko rok lenge.

Rakshika:- Shaurya! Ye main bhi jaanti hu aur aap bhi ki Vivaan akele Kaal ka samna nahi kar payega. Isiliye maine soch liya hai,"ab samay aa gaya hai,mere wapas aane ka."

GS:- nahi rajkumari! Aap aisa kuch nahi karengi. Aapke zinda hone ka sach agar hum charon ke beech hi rahe, to accha hai. Agar Kaal ko pata chala to.....

Suddenly ek ladka (face not shown) seen mein enter karta hai aur Kaal ka naam sunkar ghabra jaata hai.

Boy:- 😨kya! Kaal! Matlab wo sachmuch wapas aa gaya hai. Nahi...... Aisa nahi ho sakta. Agar use pata chala ki Rakshu zinda hai, to......

[Use kuch yaad aata hai. Kuch aawajen uske kaan mein gunjane lagti hai.

😈 "Kaal! Kaal hu main!"
😈 "ab hoga acchai ka sarvanaash! Aur iski suruat hogi tujhse."
"Aaaahhhhhh" a little girl shout in pain
😈"Hahahaha!"
"Naaahhiiiii!" A little boy shout ]

Boy:- nahi! (Past yaad karne ke baad wo aur bhi jyada dar gya) *to Rakshu* nahi Rakshu! Main tumhe aisa nahi karne dunga. Main already apni ek bahan ko kho chuka hu, ab tumhe nahi kho sakta.

Rakshika:- but Avi...... (Cut by Shaurya)

(So that boy is Avi)

GS:- hum sahmat hai inki baat se. Hum faisla kar chuke hai ki aap Kaal ke saamne nahi jayengi.

Rakshu:- par Shaurya! Kisi ko to Vivaan ki madad karni hogi na! Aur mujhe pata hai ki wo kon hai.

Avi:- ae...! Dekho Rakshu! Tumhe Kaal ke saamne jaane se roka hai to iska matlab ye nahi hai ki tum apne bhai ko Kaal ka shikar banne ke liye bhej dogi. Main pahle hi bol deta hu ki main Kaal ke saamne nahi jaaunga,bas!

Rakshika:- aapki baat kar bhi kon raha hai. (Slowly) darpok kahin ka.

Shaurya:- to phir aap kiski baat kar rahi hai Rajkumari?

Rakshika:- wahi,jiske naam se burai ghabrati hai. Wahi, jisne aaj tak Vivaan ko akela nahi hone diya. Wahi,jo hamesha Vivaan ke saath kandhe se kandha milakar khade rahe. Aur itna hi nahi, hamesha dhaal bankar har khatre se use bachaya bhi. Wo Vivaan ke liye uske Guru, margdarshak, partner, uske bade bhai, uske sab kuch hai.

Shaurya:- Rajkumari! Kahin aap unki baat to nahi kar rahi hai!

Rakshika:- haan! Shaurya.

To ab aap log guess kijiye ki wo kon hai.

Aur agar aapko story plot samajh mein aa raha hai, to comment mein ye bhi bataiye ki aapko ye plot kaisa laga.

Thanku 😁

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