Genshin inazuma rewrite [Eng]

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The immovable god and the eternal euthumia
After braving the storm the traveler which in this version is Lumine(because yes) and Paimon arrive in Inazuma.
-Wow! Inazuma looks amazing!-said Paimon while observing the sights of the nation of eternity
-It does seem to be pretty big but i heard that Inazuma has some pretty strict laws-said Lumine while putting her arms on the deck
-Well i guess you're right-said Paimon while slightly being worried about getting arrested for breaking one of the laws
Then Kazuha walks up to them.
-I hope i'm not interrupting but there is one thing you need to know, the archon is very stubborn and won't listen to you not to mention she won't hesitate to cut your head off just to get closer to eternity-said Kazuha warning them both
-Don't worry Kazuha, there is no way anything will happen to us with the traveler around!-said Paimon confidently
-Well i wish you look, especially with the vision hunt degree going on you're going to have to be careful-said Kazuha and looked at the horizon
-Once again don't worry, after all i'm sure we'll solve the problem like we always do-said Paimon with confidence once again
-You mean i will solve all the problems?-asked Lumine reminding Paimon about the fact that she's the one solving everything
-This time Paimon will help for sure!-said Paimon happily and hugged Lumine
-Well it's time to hop off, wanna come along Kazuha?-asked Lumine
-I'll join you later, if you ever need help go to the Komore teahouse i'll be waiting for you there-said Kazuha and stepped off the boat
Lumine and Paimon said goodbye to Beidou and began the journey to Inazuma city, and what better way to start a journey than get arrested!
-Hey stop right there! You two are arrested by the order of the Shogun!-Shouted Kujou Sara while running up to Paimon and Lumine
-Arrested!? But we didn't do anything!-shouted Paimon trying to defend herself and the traveler
-Nothing you say can help you because i only follow orders from the Shogun alone, now drop your weapons and come with me-said Kujou Sara and took both Paimon and the traveler to the Shogun
-There they are Almighty Shogun-said Sara and left
-So we are already meeting the archon huh?-whispered Paimon
-An exeption, the enemy of eternity-said the Shogun
-What do you mean an "exeption"?-asked Paimon
-You blonde traveler pose a threat to the ideal eternity that i've been pursuing, meaning that you must be eliminated!-Shouted the Shogun and pulled out her blade from the booba in order to strike down the traveler
-WAIT! Isn't there any other way? We didn't even get to ask her anything!-shouted Paimon scared
But you don't get the chance to answer as you suddenly feel sleepy with the last thing you seeing was a fox lady walking towards the Shogun. After a while you finally wake up and see Yae Miko talking to Ayaka and her brother Ayato, but you are to tired to make anything out of it not to mention Paimon shouting in your ear and asking questions like are you fine? And that stuff.
-Take care of them miss and mister Kamisato and after they the blonde one is recovered bring her to me-said Yae Miko making it clear she does not want to take care of you
-Of course miss Miko-said Ayaka and walked up to you but since you're too dizzy to wake up, all that happened is that you fall asleep again
A couple of hours have passed and you finally wake up, luckily Paimon calmed down and fell asleep meaning that you finally have some time for yourself, but as you think that Ayaka walks up to you.
-Are you alright?-asked Ayaka and sat beside Lumine
-I'm fine, who are you?-said Lumine still confused about what happened
-I am Kamisato Ayaka, even though i don't have a vision myself i still manage to help my brother manage the Kamisato clan-said Ayaka
-What happened just now?-asked Lumine still not having the aswer as to why the Shogun tried to kill her
-You were transported to the Kamisato estate after facing the Shogun, you could've died there you know?-answered Ayaka and Paimon seemed to finally have woken up
-*yawn* that was some good sleep,*gasp* traveler are you alright!?-shouted Paimon worried about you, good for you i guess
-I'm alright-answered Lumine
-Well how about we all go for a walk? Your legs are gonna get stale if you lay like this all day you know?-asked Ayaka and before you could answer she dragged you outside to touch grass
You three walk around the Kamisato estate a bit until Ayato returns.
-I'm back!-shouted Ayato
-Oh let's go i need to introduce you to my brother!-said Ayaka and once again dragged you back to the estate
-I see you're awake, how do you feel?-asked Ayato
-Well Paimon's head hurts a bit but outside of that everything's fine-said Paimon
-Remember to eat a lot and drink a lot of water, oh and Ayaka i've got a task for you, we're planning on making a festival for all those who lost their lives during the vision hunt deegre, i want you to go to the city in order to make preperations since you don't have a vision the Shogun army shouldn't bother you-asked Ayato
-Of course i'll make preperations, traveler want to go with me?-asked Ayaka
-Of course!-said Lumine
-What about Paimon?-asked Paimon
-How about you stay and  try all the food?-asked Ayato
-Well of course Paimon will stay for that! Bye traveler!-shouted Paimon and went with Ayato
-Well then let's go to meet Yoimiya, she surely has some fireworks to get us-said Ayaka and you noded after which you both went to the city
After a while you arrive at the Komore teahouse and you are ready to meet up with both Kazuha and Yoimiya.
-Hello Yoimiya!-said Ayaka while walking into the teahouse
-Oh Ayaka! Good to see you again! I see you've got a friend with you this time-said Yoimiya walking behind the counter
-I see you also have some friends with you-said Ayaka pointing at Kazuha and Thoma
-Hello traveler, so we meet again-said Kazuha and waved at you
-Hi Kazuha!-said Lumine as she waved back at Kazuha
-So you two already know each other-said Yoimiya
-My name's Thoma the houskeeper of the teahouse, pleasure meeting you-said Thoma and shook your hand
-Anyway what do you need?-asked Yoimiya
-Just a couple of fireworks-said Ayaka
-Alright just let me take a quick trip back home and you're good to go!-said Yoimiya and ran out of the teahouse
Thoma made you some tea while everyone waited, and soon Yoiymiya was back.
-I'm back! There ya go!-said Yoimiya and handed Ayaka the fireworks
-Thank you!-said Ayaka
-Anyways can i ask you a favor?-said Kazuha
-Of course what is it?-said Lumine
Then Kazuha explained about the situation Inazuma is in and all of you make up a plan on how to defeat the Shogun.
-Well then see you soon!-said Ayaka and both of you went back to the estate
But as soon as they came back Paimon has flew to them to tell Ayaka and you some bad news.
-Ayaka! Traveler!-shouted Paimon with a scared voice
-Paimon what happened?-asked Lumine
-The Shogun army they have Ayato!-shouted Paimon
-What!? Where did they take him!?-shouted Ayaka with an angry voice
Then they all ran to the middle of Inazuma city, only to see Ayato get striken down by the Shogun.
-AYATO!-shouted Ayaka and ran up to him
-Ayato! No! Answer me! DON'T LEAVE ME!-shouted Ayaka crying while trying to wake up her brother
-Ayaka... they got me, it doesn't seem like i can get out of this one so know that i loved you more than anything else in the world, so please live on-said Ayato as he was dying
-No,*sob* why?-cried Ayaka and suddenly behind her the Shogun unleashed an attack, luckily you managed to block it before the Shogun could hit her
-So you came back-said the Shogun
-How could you!?-shouted Ayaka full of anger
-Ayaka please calm down, this isn't the time to be angry-said Lumine
-Exeptions, the enemy of eternity, i shall eliminate every last one of you-said the Shogun and once again pulled the sword out of her booba
Ayake drew her blade.
-You will be inlaid upon this statue!-shouted the Shogun and transported both to the plane of euthumnia
Inside there was meditating Ei and without any words the fight began and you know how it went so yeah.
You and Ayaka get saved by Thoma Yoimiya and Kazuha, and get transported to Watatsumi island