chapter 53

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You know what ur author also became a bit strict now a days. I WON'T UPDATE until and unless the target is done.

Tae cried for a while and went to yn's room to take her maths test. As he informed her earlier. While going to her room he thought to check on jk. He entered the room and found him sleeping . Then......

Then.......He Remembered that it's his b'day. He also suddenly remembered that he didn't make any dinner for them. He immediately ran to the kitchen and saw 2 bowls  lying there. He checked cctv and got to know that jk made oats and both jk and yn ate it with chapatti.

We can make oats with veges and different masalas. It tastes as panner curry. Try it out. Masala plays a very imp role. I think I can be a part time new food inventor like chila, veg oats, etc....

He felt proud of his baby. Even yn didn't know that food was not made that day. He did  it all secretly. He again went to jk's room, slowly picked him up and layed him down in his bed and literally FILLED him with kisses.

He then came to check his copy and got shocked to see 45 trigonometry solved answers. Jk was facing problem in trigonometry so definitely their were some mistakes which tae will definitely adress but not in his b'day. Before that he solved a chemistry worksheet prepared by tae. Tae again felt guilty for not being able
to celebrate his baby's b'day properly. He then moved to yn's room and found her eating





Literally eating The mathematics formulas. "Is she this much scared of me", tae thought in his mind. She was loudly saying out the formulas to by heart it.

He then noticed her room, which was already cleaned..... Atleast she obeys him now a days.

Tae - time is up baby girl
Yn - OPPA (she looked at tae in horror. Guess what she was able to revise only 20th chapter)

Tae - yeah baby me. Is there any ghoost behind me (he said and looked behind and screamed - "ahhhhhhhhhhh"

(Yoona woke up due to the scream)

Tae - jk u scared me and yn as well. What are u doing here go and sleep.

Jk - eat oats and chapatti. I made for both u and noona.Go, eat and come

Tae - I -(even before he could complete his sentence jk went and slept in yn's bed) This boy . Yn let's go to living room. Let's not disturb him

Yn- ok

Tae pov- this girl didn't revise.I am sure of it. Look at her face. She is looking like a bhigi billi

They came to living room and sat there. Tae gave 15 mins time to yn..... Till then he prepared the que paper

Tae - time is up girl. Come on give me ur copy
Yn - oppa no pls 5 more mins

Tae - YN time is time. I gave u extra 15 mins now give me ur copy
Yn - o-oppa t-two mins m-more pls

Tae forcefully pulled the copy and gave a slight hit on her shoulder.

Tae - once I said give means give
Yn - (she started crying out of fear)

Tae - was that hit so PAINFUL that u started crying, drama queen . START soon and NO MISTAKES got it

Yn - yes y-yes oppa(she said crying silently)

Tae gave her 20 ques, 10 from each ch as they must sleep at 1

After 35 mins yn completed the test. U all were waiting for this part isn't it????

Hanging u all there. Let's meet after the target is done.






























































Surprise. Nahi chouke. Mujhe malum tha

Yn -oppa completed
Tae - hmm (tae head was hurting by now. Why? Becuz he again started to think about his and yoona's problems. He felt trastfrated and who is the victim , who is gonna be the victim of tae's anger    -    *drum 🥁 beating sound*- KIM YN)

Yn was in her world - "the world of fear".

The first 10 ans were all correct (from 20th ch)

11,12,13 was correct too

14 - she wrote 45 +65 as 100

*slap in shoulder*

Tae - 100 times literally 100 times I have told u to avoid SILLY mistakes.
But u (another slap in her shoulder)

Yn - o-oppa(another slap was coming but she blocked it...... Literally blocked it. It's a crime  fr)

Tae- U HAVE THIS MUCH GUTS TO BLOCK ME. (He said and picked up what ever was there beside him.)

It was a steel medium size spatula, without any holes, the flat one.
























This shit hurts a lot. I literally tried it on myself to write these story lines.

One day I did the same mistake as yn. In class 2 or 3may be and my mom was like, " It's the end of ur beautiful soul"

Yn - No no n-no o-oppa (she stood up from sofa and tried to go back wards. )

Tae held her right hand and gave her two hits in her left arm.

Tae - U will disrespect me nahh
Yn - n-no oppa never p-pls sorry
Tae - sorry (he said while shaking his head up and down and slapped her across her face)

Hearing weird sounds yoona came out of her room. She got shocked to see tae. She saw tae from balcony

*2 hits in her left arm*- using the utensil
*1hit in her left thigh*
yn -arhhhh o-ppa(sob)
Tae - u will block nahh. I will break ur hands today so that u won't be able to block again
WHAT OPPA

*tae then left the utensil *
Tae - what oppa huh?
*slapped across her face*
Yn - oppa s-sorry pls

He then held her hands in one hand and asked - "what is 45 + 65
Yn - 110
Tae - then Why DID U WRITE 100 IN THE ANSWER PAPER 📄HUH?
*He said and again slapped her in her right cheek. *
Poor girl wasn't even able to rub it
Tae - and then u will block me huh see ur guts

*He again picked up the utensil and gave a hard hit in her left arm*

He held her ears and gave it a hard twist and again gave her 2 hits in her left arm. He again kept the utensil and was going to slap her when 1 soft, delicate and beautiful hand stopped him. He looked to his side and saw yoona. Yoona literally went into shock state seeing tae.... When she recovered from her small coma, she came to save her sissy.

Tae- yoona (softest voice EVER) What happened. Why did u wake up? Anything disturbing u babe

Yoona - wh-what was that
tae  - tae

Alright guys. I never expected to make yoona's shocked scene but for ur request I did it. Now I am unable to figure out how to write it. So pls give me some tips

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