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Jon Arctic POV
Arctican Realm, lands beyond the wall, 295 AC, During the third year of the 3-year Time Skip.
One year later.
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Jon took Seryna and Ygritte to his room in the grand weirwood after arriving in the sacred grove with the girls atop Ghost. Eragon tried to follow out of curiosity, but with a mental command, he dismissed the dragon.
"Hahaha. Finally, I can take off this southern dress." Ygritte complained, preferring to marry in armor rather than the garment she was wearing.
"You looked very pretty in it, though." Seryna commented beside her as they entered the room.
"I don't know how you don't complain about these clothes..." Ygritte murmured, looking at Seryna's white dress.
"Jon likes it, that's all that matters to me." Seryna said, crossing her arms and turning her attention back to Jon, looking around the room.
"What are you doing? Why don't we just do what we need to do?" Ygritte asked, sounding somewhat impatient to remove her dress.
"Aren't you nervous?" The woman beside Ygritte asked amusingly.
"Of course I am. But I want to get to bed as soon as possible..." She murmured.
Jon turned his gaze back to the girls looking at him and sighed. "I'm checking on the animals, I don't want any disturbances tonight." He said, connecting with all the animals around the tree.
"That's good, I don't want to have sex with a dragon or a wolf watching." Seryna approached and placed her hands on Jon's chest, giving him a kiss on the neck. This surprised not only Jon but also Ygritte in her dress.
"Hey, what are you doing, you're being quite bold." Ygritte complained with her face quite red watching Seryna act this way.
"Didn't you talk about this with the older women? They told me to start like this." Seryna kissed Jon's neck and sealed their lips before turning her attention back to Ygritte behind them.
"Of course, but that doesn't mean I'll act that way, I'm quite embarrassed." Ygritte spoke, her face competing in redness with her hair as she looked away, clearly embarrassed. She spoke again, looking at Jon, who seemed to have enjoyed Seryna's action. "How are we going to do this, all of us are virgins, should we do it one at a time? Wouldn't that be better?" Ygritte asked.
"Why? We're a family now, let's do it together..." Seryna left Jon and walked over to Ygritte.
"Hey, what are you doing?!" Ygritte, still embarrassed, was stunned as Seryna passed her until she was behind her, with her face close to her ear.
"I'm sure our husband will appreciate this very much." Seryna commented as she began to remove Ygritte's dress in front of Jon.
"Stop it!" Ygritte complained, but didn't move to stop the girl as her body began to be exposed to her husband.
"Jon, do you like seeing your wife like this?" Seryna teased the man, Jon couldn't deny he was getting aroused by all of Ygritte's curves and intimate parts exposed in such a way, he had always held back over the last years, merely limiting himself to kisses and trying to avoid the temptation of sleeping with some of them, Ygritte had always been more reserved than Seryna, but he couldn't deny the beautiful woman, as he looked at her beautiful breasts and her intimate part with fire-kissed hair like her head.
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Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic - ASOIAF/GOT
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