Please review what I have written so far and tell me what to change in it. Like I said before, this is my first story ever, so I have no clue if it's good or not. So please comment what you think is good about it and what is bad.
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The Children of Olympus
FantasyZoe and Jake are on an adventure in ancient Greece to save the world. On their way they will have to make sacrifices, control their powers, and learn the true meaning of friendship. But will they survive?
