This was a school assignment that I recently did and I honestly was quite proud of it, but then I asked for feed back from not only a friend, but both of my parents, and they all just said it was great and nothing more... Which tbh I felt like they were just trying to spare my feelings and slightly upset me, so here I am, posting it on wattpad of all places, hoping that people will be brutally honest and give me feed back. I want to turn this into an actual story but I have little experience and 0 motivation, so yes be brutal be mean and don't worry about sparing my feelings but please do give feed back :)
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The Moon's Never Coming Eclipse
Short StoryLuna, a girl that feels as if she's always in the shadow of her friend Helio. *Photo take from the official NASA website* no foul intentions of use with said photo, and credits to the person who took it.
