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~Best First Chapter Results~

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Honorable Mentions

'Everybody hates Grey' by axelle_grace14

The chapter and the plot in the first part was well written but requires a little more improvement while writing. The writing style should be changed a little, and while writing it could be made sure that it doesn't sound like a speech or article but as a chapter of the book that has to be presented with a little more creativity.

'Vine of Hunger |ONC 2024|' by alana_kate

Chapter was written well with the appropriate use of words and grammar in the first chapter and describing the surroundings of the characters. Still there is always a place of improvement and In the first chapter it is somehow a bit confusing about the events taking place in the story, which makes this a point for improvement in the chapter. Like if a event or a particular thing is to be added it should be added with creativity such that the readers will not only read it but see that also it should be written in such a manner while overall the chapter was awesome.

'Romantic Story' by aurora_2604

The first chapter was written well but there were some points where it is needed to be improved, The chapter was really very lengthy and it should be mostly between 1500-2000 words as most readers on Wattpad want to read between that limit only and this helps in maintaining a proper suspense and curiosity of the readers to read more and if all the information about the main leads are given in the first chapter only then this gives readers an idea of what's going to happen next and there will be no curiosity among them to read the next chapter if all of that is given at the starting, the past of the characters should be revealed later while in starting it should be shown that they have a terrific past or so which gives the readers curiosity to know what has happened and will be loved by them if secrets are revealed in a que and in a proper manner.

Beside all this the chapter written was good

The Surgeon's Solitude' by Kriti_writes1

The book was well written with the appropriate use of words and humour in between but there are some areas in which it could be improved more and While reading the first chapter it is showing the female lead as weak or so which is not mostly appreciated by the readers i.e the main leads of the story should not be portrayed weak or vulnerable in the first chapter only as it could give a wrong impact about the book and may not be liked by readers, while the personality of the leads should be portrayed in such a way that readers will love them in the first chapter only.

'Reyhi: A perpetual Love Story' by pen-pusher_a

The first chapter was written awesome but there was not much in that to interpret more in this, while in the chapter it is shown that author was not very much interested in writing this as in the first chapter no creativity was shown in describing the female or male lead and even their meet at last was like very common from many of the books. The author has to work more and should try to describe the scene a little bit more as the writing is a creativity which requires writers to make the readers show the scene not just make them read by personifying it and adding more creativity.

3rd Place

'Pristine's Problem|ONC 2024' by sparklet11

The first chapter of this book was unique and the suspense maintained was very well done. Even the concept and plot of the book written in the first chapter is really good and by reading the chapter it can also be found that the chapter planning was also done really well.

2nd Place

'Dil Dariya' by NayantaraHK

The first chapter was well written but There was some unnecessary information too added in the chapter which could be used as a suspense or mystery in the plot later but being used all in the first chapter only made the first chapter a little boring, even though the plot was well written spreading a kind and beautiful message that we should help Everyone and helping others gives us satisfaction.

1st Place

'Cassandra De Ville' by lupe6583v

The first chapter was beautifully describing the surroundings and environment around the characters, while it is also giving short and proper information about characters while adding the adequate suspense and thriller to the plot as the story continues, which makes the reader very curious about what is next and showing a great team work of both sisters while protecting themselves and portraying the courage and self-confidence of the main female character.

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