Pokemon: The World Tree

Act 1

Enter: Yggdrasil

(If you want to get right to the story, just go to chapter one... )

Hello, and thank you for your interest.  I've had this story festering inside of me for a while now, and I'm happy that I'll be able to share it with you.  

Just a little about the story mechanics; it's told from the perspective of Pokémon in a third-person omniscient viewpoint - there's a non-character narrator ("he" instead of "I"), who can tell you what the characters are thinking. Also, I'm kind of fudging the whole "four moves per Pokémon," thing. There is still a limit but moves like scratch, tackle, or bite - you know, the attacks any animal can do - don't count towards there move limit. Moreover, say a Pokémon knew Water Gun, but later learns Hydro Pump. That Pokémon can still do the lower level attack, without effecting the limit as well. The story is also set years into the future, and will have absolutely nothing to do with any Pokémon series. This is not a Pokémon Mystery dungeon fanfic so there are still humans, just not the ones you know.

Just so you know what you're getting yourself into, this first act should be between 10 and 15 chapters, each containing around 3,000 words.  Understandably, this is a lot to read and edit so I'm shooting for a once a month update schedule at least.  If that thought somehow saddens you, than fear not!  There are some things you - yes you - can do to help me write faster and better.  

I love construcitve criticism.  Love it.  Sadly, I'm horrible at reading minds (although I have been practicing), so telling me your opinion is the best way for me to understand what you think.  ANY  comments would brighten my day and give me a better idea of where to take the story.  Don't get me wrong, this story is fully planned, but the little details are always in the works so I need to see what I'm doing from a different angle. Full reviews are the best but I want to hear everything and anything.  Little things.  Big things.  Plot holes.  Spelling errors.  Your favorite character. There is absolutely no way to hurt my feelings so go nuts with it; honestly if you want to quit the story it would also be helpful to know why.  I'm trying out a lot of new character types and styles of writing so your comments really help. 

Well, you made it though my PSA so you might as well stick around until the end of the story.  Thank you again for your interest, and happy reading!