1. There's too much sickly sweet syrupy romance. And it's only skin deep. She likes him 'cuz he's hot. He likes her 'cuz she's...well, I'm not quite sure why he likes her actually... She smells good?
2. The word "beautiful" and all it's cousins (even the ones twice removed) are used a gazillion times when describing Edward.
3. Edward is a stalker and stupid Bella finds that romantic.
4. Bella is a friggin' pansy. Girl needs to grow a backbone and stop waitin' around for everybody else to come save her.
5. The story itself is totally over used and there's nothing original about it. Can you say cliche?
6. Stephenie Meyer, for some reason, likes to include EVERY little mundane detail of Bella's life. Honestly, I don't CARE that she ate a granola bar for breakfast or that it took her five minutes to make a sandwich. Really, life will go on.
7. The vampires are "vegetarians."
8. The vampires are disco balls.
9. The werewolves don't even show up until the next book. (Which sucks even more than Twilight.)
10. The conflict, which lasts for a grand total of 70 pages (out of, like, 500), is resolved in time for Bella's prom! Happy super fun time!
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No plot
No characters
No substance. It just arouses teen girls
Nothing goes on; few events
Way too repetitive
I was looking down. Then i looked up too see him. He was not looking back. After a while of staring, I started to take to my friend. Later, i looked at him again. This time, he was looking back and he looked angry. i quickly looked down. after a minute, i allowed myself too steal another glance. he still looked ferocious. as i was thinking, my friend told me he was staring at me. when i looked at him again, he looked amused this time. next class was biology. AND SO THE WHOLE FRIGGING THING CONTINUES LIKE THAT.
the next day i awoke and drove to school. AND SO THE WHOLE FRIGGING THING CONTINUES LIKE THAT.
the next day it was raining as i walked into school. AND SO THE WHOLE FRIGGING THING CONTINUES LIKE THAT.
Well at least its like that for the first 100 pages. that was all i could bear. i try to keep an open mind and try out books, but 100 pages of that nonsense was outrageous. _____
