ouchy old writing (chapter 5)

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 Ashton took Emerald to a hospital, Calvin came with them too even though he didn’t want to. It had been Two Days since the fire, Sara hadn’t come back and Emerald was still unconscious. Hector had been called to the hospital as soon as Emerald got there mostly because he was Emerald’s father. Ash and Hector have stayed by Emerald’s bedside this whole time. It was… Terrifying for Ash, he knew that Emerald was fine, she wasn’t injured by the fire at all; her Vines covered her before she could be injured by the roof collapsing. Ash was angry and confused, WHY wasn’t she awake yet, and HOW can I fix this is what he was thinking. You as the reader have to have some sympathy for Ash, don’t You? Emerald’s weakness is fire, This is why she wasn’t waking up. Hector was what I call a Mixed Magic person, he has a little bit of everything. He held Emerald’s hand, and Frost danced from his fingers to Emerald’s hand. “Hold on, Hector, what are you doing? Won’t that just hurt her more!?” Ash and Calvin said in unison. “Both of you, trust me I know what I'm doing. Plus, when Emerald was in that fire, it started attacking her, something unseen to any medical professional. This will help.” Hector sounded confident. The frost continued to travel up Emerald’s hand, She gasped and sat up. “See? I told you” Hector said in a playful tone of voice. The frost Melted away and Hector squeezed Emerald’s hand. “Welcome back to the mortal realm!” Ash joked, he was trying hard to hold back tears. Emerald jumped into Ash’s arms and hugged him, with her legs wrapped around his waist. She giggled, “Welp! I guess I can say I’ve almost died now!” The mood in the room lifted as soon as Emerald talked, almost like a weight lifted from everyone’s shoulders. They left the hospital soon after.

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