1. I am not a native English speaker but I'll be using Grammarly for some grammar enhancement
2. Because this is my first story (book)
3. I've read the Tensura LN (abridged version) until Vol 21
4. Is there anyone here who wants to help me become a beta reader for my story?
5. You can comment like make a correction if I using English incorrectly
Serious : Please don't redistribute my work without my consent
" Talking Normally "
' Thinking '
< When Rimuru Talking with Ciel (no one can hear Rimuru and Ciel) or with others using Thought Communication >
<< Ciel (Rimuru Manas) Talking Pattern >>
*I'll use a time skip since at some point it will not be irrelevant to this story
Zen POV
It seems like my visit to this world, known as Cardinal World, was not a waste of time. I visited the stalls, colosseum, and labyrinth, and had conversations with goblins (who seemed different from normal goblins), dragonewts, humans, and demons for around 2 hours. Suddenly, while I was sitting in a nearby tree, I was approached by none other than Souei-dono..
Souei : " "Zen-dono, my master wants to see you. Please follow me to his office!" " he talking while suddenly appearing like a ninja
Zen : *nods and then starts standing*
And after that, they started walking to the office for around 10 minutes, during that time I was greeted by some high-level demons (or I should say Primordial demons).
Souei : " Here we are, we are currently at my master's office! " he said while we were currently standing at his master's office " I'll lead you to Lord Rimuru! " but he was interrupted by someone
??? : " I'll take care of it from now, Souei-dono! " he said while suddenly standing beside us, making us instantly look at this person
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Souei : " Very well Diablo-dono! " Then he looks at me " Then he will accompany you to meet Lord Rimuru! " he then suddenly disappeared like a ninja again
Zen : *sigh* " So, your name is Diablo right? Can you lead me to your master? " then he nodded his head
Diablo : " With pleasure! "
And after that, we started to enter the office building, during our walk, he asked me about something
Diablo : " You know, I never saw a Beastman like you before, you're not from the former nation of Eurazania, aren't you? "
Zen : " Well, I'm not really from that ex-nation, but I'll frankly say this to you, I'm the one that you would call an Otherworlder! "
Diablo : *smirking a bit* " And you're okay with telling me about this information, Zen-dono? "
