12| I'd have kissed you senseless

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Before we dive into this chapter, there are a few points I need to clarify for you, readers.

Firstly, some of you have mentioned that the story focuses too much on the children and other characters rather than the main couple. Let me explain: this story picks up right after a 4-year gap, so naturally, I need to introduce the changes that have occurred during this time. I can't immediately jump into romance and conversations when there are many other important developments to address. The supporting cast matters, as does protagonists, so that when I do write about them in upcoming chapters, it won't seem abrupt. Similarly, if supporting characters are mentioned less in future chapters, it won't feel like they're there just for show.

Secondly, regarding the lack of chemistry between the main couple or their focus on things other than their relationship, there are two major reasons. a) The gap of four years has left behind a lot of unresolved questions and complications between them. There's a natural hesitation and fear of how their feelings will be received. I need to portray this journey as natural and allow them to work through it slowly and perhaps painfully. b) They're no longer the carefree couple from college. They're adults now with responsibilities on their shoulders - they're parents, caretakers of their home, and have demanding careers. Naturally, they need to strike a balance between all these aspects of their lives.

Thirdly, regarding the updates, I understand they've been irregular and at long intervals, and I take full responsibility for that. But don't you think readers also play a role here? It's difficult to continue writing with low response; it's unnatural to draw inspiration from silence. I'm already writing this story primarily to see it through to completion; otherwise, I would have ended it after Book 1 of their story. Every time I set goals, they go unmet, whether in terms of votes or comments. It's important for readers to understand this perspective too because it feels like I'm being treated as a servant, providing content without any right to expect anything in return. It's disheartening, but I'm used to it now since it's been an ongoing issue. I just felt it necessary to address this. I hope this clarifies things.

Lastly, to those who find the story boring, I would humbly suggest, not just as a writer but as a reader myself, to consider dropping this story. Trust me, it's not worth investing your time in something that doesn't interest you. This book is a cute, fluffy, vanilla romance that aims to portray the ups and downs of a relationship. It also explores how, after marriage, both partners need to sacrifice and understand each other to make things work as equals. If your expectations differ from this, please feel free to discontinue reading.

 If your expectations differ from this, please feel free to discontinue reading

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I'm pacing back and forth, fiddling with my fingers nervously. I'm scared as hell to confront this situation, but deep down, I know I need to go talk to him, sort things out once and for all. With everything else already on my plate, I really don't need any more reasons to stress out right now.

I see Arushi coming out of the study, and I grab her hand right away, stopping her. "Is he free? Can I talk to him? He's not in a bad mood, is he?" I ask her, hoping for some good news.

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