Draft(Not a real chapter, just practice for author)

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Let me explain, this chapter doesn't hold any importance to the plot so consider it an experiment not a real chapter. I made this fighting scene to hopefully receive feedback and Improve it when the time comes for a real fight.

As I said this is my first try so don't be too harsh, but I'll appreciate any feedback.

By the way it's a fight between our main character and Ryuen's gang.

And Sorry for not bringing a real chapter. ):

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Ryuen steps forward, a smirk on his face. "So, you think you can take all of us on, Suzune? You're just one girl."

Suzune's eyes flick over each member of the gang, assessing their weaknesses and positioning. Her expression remains unchanged, a mask of calm and cold determination.

"Say something, will you?" Ibuki taunts, trying to provoke a reaction. "Or are you too scared?"

Suzune doesn't respond, her body shifting into a ready stance.

Without warning, Ishizaki lunges at Suzune, a crude punch aimed at her head. Suzune sidesteps smoothly, her movements precise and fluid. She counters with a quick, devastating Muay Thai roundhouse kick to the side of his head. 

The sound of impact echoes through the night air as Ishizaki drops instantly, unconscious

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The sound of impact echoes through the night air as Ishizaki drops instantly, unconscious.

Ibuki's eyes widen in shock. "Damn, she's fast!"

Ibuki rushes her next, trying to overwhelm Suzune with speed. "Take this!" she yells, throwing a punch.

Suzune's training kicks in, her mind working at lightning speed. She blocks Ibuki's punch with her left arm, using the momentum to pull her forward and into a Muay Thai knee strike to the gut.

 She blocks Ibuki's punch with her left arm, using the momentum to pull her forward and into a Muay Thai knee strike to the gut

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 As Ibuki doubles over, Suzune transitions smoothly into a Taekwondo sidekick to her chest.

 As Ibuki doubles over, Suzune transitions smoothly into a Taekwondo sidekick to her chest

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