What I thought TPOT 9 would be like before the real thing came out

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shows random scenes of Four interacting with Fanny and Black Hole, showing him eventually having a positive relationship with both.

(cuts to the actual scene.)

Black Hole: Hey Fanny, The S! has lost just as much as us, and they were actually trying! Do you know what that means?

Fanny: It means that they just suck.

Black Hole: Uh, no? It means that preventing death doesn't harm us.

Fanny: But they don't have a choice but to be bad! They just suck! We don't suck, so something is holding us back!

Black Hole: Listen, we're going to prevent every death we can, no matter what.

Fanny: THAT'S IT! I'M SWITCHING TEAMS!

Black hole and Marker gasp

Black Hole: YOU CAN'T DO THAT!

Two: I say she can!

Two whispers to Four: She really can't; I just don't want her to know that.

Four: uh huh...

Fanny: Snowball! I'm on your team now!

Snowball: Great.

Four sees some far away line of electricity that has letters spelling out "Come here Four." So they do.

Remote: Come on, lightning! Four won't show up!

Lightning: We have to at least try! Think about all of the times they dismissed your idea, and you even got out because they're too stupid!

Four: What's going on in here?

Lightning: gasp He's here!

Saw: Cloudy, can you put me down now?

Cloudy: Okay!

Lightning: Four, we need to talk about Black hole!

Four: Yeah, I know, he keeps thinking he's great because he sacrifices victory to stop someone from having a split second of pain and a minute or two of not being involved.

Lightning: Yeah! He must be stopped! He even called me 'overreacting', and Cake told me he yelled at Fanny for questioning it!

Four: Wow, it seems like he's even worse than I thought.

Remote: Hey, Lightning, you do realize how angry Four gets when he sees a normal person seeing themself as a hero, right?
(new scene)


Two: Yeah, Clock, maybe it's better if you just go to the elimination area. for yourself and for Winner.

Clock: Okay, fine, but can I have at least one more day here? Maybe I can write something for them.

Two: Sure! Oh, and also, Fanny, it seems to me like you keep becoming more and more distant from everything.

Fanny: Yeah, I wish Lightning was still here. Maybe if Bubble came, that would also be nice.

Two: Hey, how about I tell Four to get this 'Bubble' girl over here?

Fanny: Do you really mean it?

Two: Yes!

Fanny: Wow! You're too kind. Just like her...
Two: Hey Four, can you invite Bubble over here to help Fanny feel better?

Four: sigh Fine. But first, I must look for something. Hey you! Do you know something that's immune to being sucked into a black hole?

Golden speaker box (my own idea for a character): Well, black holes don't exactly "suck."

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