Chapter 4: The Note

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So the trio (wait... can you call two kidnappers and a hostage a trio? Oh well) drove away to Mr. Oden's house.

"Did I ever tell you I have a secret lab?"

"No.... YOU HAVE A LAB?!"

"Oh yeah I normally don't tell students."

"Where is it? Why do you need a lab??"

"Well it's in the basement in a shed in my backyard."

"...You didn't answer my question. WHY

DO YOU NEED A LAB?"

There was a silence in the car and all they could here was the muffled yells of Camel.

"... I dissect humans. And now camels..."

Crystal's jaw dropped but Mr Oden cut in before she could freak out about her P.E. teacher that dissects humans. And Camels. "We're here."

Walking through Mr. Oden's house was like walking through a girly teenage girl's room. Full with pictures and junk on his wall... except without all the Justin Beiber and one Direction posters they were all pictures of MRS. BEZICH. CREEPY!

Crystal covered her eyes until she got to Mr. Creepy Human-Dissector Oden's lab. When they entered the shed, Mr. Oden opened up a trap door in the floor leading down. It was super dark, and they could hear Camel scream, "HEY WHO TURNED OFF THE LIGHTS?"

Mr. Oden's lab was actually really dark and it appeared there was no light switch. Great. He told Crystal to follow him so she wouldn't trip on anything (which she of course still did...) and he stopped when he got to a desk. He set the kidnapped Camel on the desk, took the net off of him, then switched a super bright light on. It was one of those light's that police used for interviewing criminals.

Camel: Whoa the sun must off just turned on or something...

Oden: Shhhhhh we are going to ask you a few questions.

Camel: Questions?!

Oden: Let's start with this one: Where were you on Friday at approximately one-o'clock PM?

Camel:Uhhh well I was a school...?

Crystal: That's probably a lie but HAVE YOU EVER SEEN THIS BOOK BEFORE?

Camel: No what the heck is a Death Note?

Crystal: I found this on Friday out of this portal and it kills whoever's full name is written in it.

Camel: WHAT?! I don't believe that. That's stupid.

Crystal: THIS IS STUPID? YOU ARE! I AM GOING TO PROVE YOU WRONG! I AM WRITING YOUR NAME IN THE DEATH NOTE!

Oden: Now now students calm down and CRYSTAL DO NOT WRITE HIS NAME!

Too late. Crystal flipped the book to the directions and read a part out loud to show that the Death Note is real.

"The human whose name is written in this note shall die.

This note will not take effect unless the writer has the person's face in their mind when writing his/her name. Therefore, people sharing the same name will not be affected.

If the cause of death is written within 40 seconds of writing the person's name, it will happen.

If the cause of death is not specified, the person will simply die of a heart attack.

After writing the cause of death, details of the death should be written in the next 6 minutes and 40 seconds.

This note shall become the property of the human world, once it touches the ground of (arrives in) the human world.

The owner of the note can recognize the image and voice of its original owner, i.e. a god of death.

The human who uses this note can neither go to Heaven nor Hell.

If the time of death is written within 40 seconds after writing the cause of death as a heart attack, the time of death can be manipulated, and the time can go into effect within 40 seconds after writing the name..."

Camel: Please tell me that she is just doing this to scare me..

Oden: CRYSTAL DO NOT WRITE HIS NAME!

She took out a pen from her backpack and wrote on the first page:

Camel.

She waited.

Camel: PLEASE TELL ME SHE'S JOKING! PLEASE!

Oden: CRYSTAL!!! WHY DID YOU DO THAT?! NOW I WILL HAVE TO TELL HIS MOTHER WHAT HAPPENED!

Thirty seconds passed.

Ten.

Nine.

Eight.

Seven.

Six.

Oden: CRYSTAL!!!

Five.

Four.

Three.

Two.

One.

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